Black Poetry : Her Love Was

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    erotic vibes
    love sweet
    and mesmerize
    2 my eyez she a treat
    her eyes of beauty
    her gentle sway
    calls my heart out to play
    in motion of a notion
    beckon me in
    a rapture of love
    deep deep within

    captured by wordz
    she say
    is this my lucky day
    now my heart beat
    like da rain drums
    of nubia
    now inside her warmness
    i roar like a king
    her sweet moans
    is like romance to my ear
    i tell her quietly
    my whole beings is taken
    unto her mental composure
    compassion sit da mood
    under a glow of starz
    as candles flicker off her
    frame of beauty

    yet i ask do u hear me !????
    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
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    dnommo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    bro'...i feels ya....this scribe is tight...

    as usual.....

    one
     
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    Mr.D Thankz big bru
    her luv was da core of my apple
    she makes it ripe & sweet
     
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    as i seek within
    the untold story
    of her soul
    and look unto
    the face she pose

    her love was

    so divine and sweet
    i've watch her scribe
    and i know of her
    she is a secret to
    many but to me she
    mines and i know
    but do she hear my
    heart cry & weep
    daily for her wordz
    of yes and i know
    she ready for my love

    her voice is like ripple rays
    of gentle morning so soft
    i feel da passion she send

    HER LOVE to me was a ummmm!
     
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    This was beautiful and tender.
     
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    this is beauty..
    the words speak out..
    i am sure she hears you..
    nice very nice...
    1 more fo da wall maybe???
    Peace from an Angel
     
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    yes indeed the whispers flowin thankz watzinaname

    Ola....thankz sistah love is calling

    angel....yes ear may hear da calling of da heart thankz
     
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    how can she NOT hear you love maestro lol :D
     
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    this was very beautiful:)
     
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    triniti........ear close to the sound of waves
    and the whispers of voice .....she may hear da
    depth of me some day !.....Thanx sis.

    SwtT......humble thank u sistah Queen
    may she hear as u did
     
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