Black Poetry : {Her} Innocence

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  1. GQ

    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I came to her unknowing
    Yet fully aware of the
    joy she brings

    Her innocence is evident
    in her style and manner
    in which she captivates
    with shy eyes

    Looking at me looking
    at her, she peers into
    my soul and sees the
    real me

    For I am on display for
    her; even if just for
    a moment

    Her innocence is pure
    and sweet but suggests
    naivete'; and her
    longing is sensual
    and strong in what
    she desires

    Does her innocence
    protect her heart?

    Only she knows

    Time will tell

    She will forever
    be innocent to
    me
     
  2. 8th wonder

    8th wonder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    that was really nice brotha. Virgin like ya know.. Feel'n ya vibe...

    8th!
     
  3. N2urSoul

    N2urSoul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ~

    Born Again....virgin???!!

    :kiss:

    Lovin' it -- all day; eryday!!
     
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    a woman can be innocent of experiencing true love, and yet not be a virgin in the physical sense...either way, it took me back to a time once remembered.
     
  5. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ.....

    you talkin' to me?!?... :)

    seriously... i loved this...
    as i love everything you do.

    thanks for sharing.

    Peace&Love...
    Blakgurl~
     
  6. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    as I sit here...

    wondering...debating
    contemplating...
    could I~
    should I~
    trust him with my heart?

    YES! GQ...puttin all ma trust in you.;)

    SWEET SCRIBE!!!
     
  7. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    GQ,

    nice piece bro. keep scribin'.

    one love,blak
     
  8. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    UbZoRb

    Sistah gyrl you took the words right outta ma mouth!!!
    How you know dat???:)LOL

    *kidding guys, just kidding*
     
  9. j'hiah

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    this was tyte.
    her "committed guilt" with me was {Her} innocence..
    shhhhh no one has 2 know.

    i'm feeling this one.
     
  10. honeyluv

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    GQ wow! u amaze me ! what u saw is what i saw
    together we see the beauty in it....thanks
    so now u know me well....
     
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