Quiet Poetry Lounge : HER HEART"

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Inside her gentle heart
    a love so mild
    she wave from pass pain
    her heart is broken from
    what is family
    her love been misused
    so afraid now
    all confused
    well from the heart of love
    Da man from above
    come to embrace the heart
    let it know love is alive
    and i care caress the mental
    wit gentle glair
    i feel the pain & hurt
    the journey into time
    but don't be afraid
    of a love so divine
    she want to release yet
    a scary feeling take place
    breaking love humble place

    open freely let the heart speak
    true love is covered deep
    so tonight as u sleep
    remember my heart weep
    to hold u in grasp wit the
    magic motion and mend
    whatever broken
    let me say as time roll
    what seem dark & cold
    we shine wit sunny delight
    don't be afraid froth ya hope
    the help is just a step
    something u can cherish
    a love so real she will feel
    and know he's very real

    don't wait forever
    and continue be under
    weather from the myth
    of the blame game
    and never speak wit shame
    u are who u are
    the new twist of journey u pose
    tonight i hand u my Rose
    of comforting
    my hand of hope
    a love so sweet
    a essnece of beauty
    a caressing warmth
    to ya heart as it seep
    open up let it go deep
    to know they is care
    and bonding
    never let u fall
    always there on call
    be ya protector
    of the heart
    listening intently when u speak
    hold u when u feel weak
    ur a rare jewel
    a pearl of love
    just need a little faith from above
    ya journey is a beautiful one
    no need to be confused
    u did not lose
    ya heart of compassion
    knocking to release
    soon the drama will be ova
    and then u seek dis lover
    to be mesmerize in the
    arms of happiness
    as the heart mend open up
    calling one in
    so sleep now as i lay it down
    smile and know it's true
    and a love that's brand new
    u can love again
    to ya heart i de vow .... :heart: :luvv: :heart:
    ur a shinning :spinstar:
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MY $$RICHNE$$....
    this is so beautiful..
    i dare not bounce off it....
    its clear...this was from the heart..wow... :luvv:
    set in a frame just like a perfect picture...kisses
     
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    you compose in your scribe
    a inner woman feeling
    response
    to that natural vibe
    that flows within
    that wants to come out
    to find someone
    who she can trust
    that won't break
    that tender heart
    Peace
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    blkangel........thankz you it was something eatting at my mind of a woman's pain & hurt the things she go through in life to be notice for who she truely is and not what others look at her to be.......

    Bluewater.......thankz yes the inner soul of her wanna speak out yet hold tears of yeasterday from the pain of struggling and how other have treated her the woman side i place in my mental and this visional vibe i scribe to a page .....i feel the woman's pain & hurt from a broken heart.
     
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    Tears.................




    just beautifull.....


    well poet you realy know how to toutch woman (people) with youre loving words....


    liberty..
     
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    Ayaatee Active Member MEMBER

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    This is beautiful rich! flow on...
     
  7. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i mean this piece realy got me Rich.....





    Liberty..
     
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    it was posed so well...
    the emotions you can feel as you read..
    each word flowin into each other...
    i really love this :angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    liberylady...........thank u so much my mind had this vision and i was feeling the inner pain of a woman and men need to honor thy Queenz more then they do for she is the true meaning he's here .....

    Ayaatee......Thankz this was a deep emotion flowin loud of a woman hurt & pain in many ways from child birth to lost hope and lies to being misused & abused

    yes blkangel.....again i honor Queenz like ya self for all y'all have to put up with in life .thankz
     
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    ah $$RICH$$, this is just a stunning work of beauty. anything I say here is inadequate, so lemme just leave it at this: you are phenomenal
     
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