Black Poetry : Her Frozen Section

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  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    eve :

    i'm sorry Howard, i'm not rolling the dice

    you weren't nice

    howard :

    here then

    i’ll roll them

    Howard picks up the dice off of the table and tosses them

    [upstairs]

    surveillance guy #1 :

    i’d think twice about going down there if i were you

    surveillance guy #2 :

    why?

    surveillance guy #1 :

    look at them

    it’s obvious they’re trying to entice us

    surveillance guy #2 :

    but into what?

    surveillance guy #1 :

    i’m not sure

    Howard rolls the dice again

    see the way she just jumped into his arms

    and you thought she was as cold as ice

    hand me that last slice of Domino’s would you?

    surveillance guy #2 :

    what now?

    surveillance guy #1 :

    we wait

    i’m sure there’ll be a domino effect





    love,

    eve & howard
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whewwwwww!!! watching from cross the room
     
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    GHETTOAMBITION Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I enjoyed this
    I feel like im in the background of all this happening
    nice scene flow
    is there a part 2?

    :grouphug:
     
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    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks guys

    there might be something in the works ghettoambition :)
     
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