Black Poetry : Her first love

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  1. blakverb

    blakverb Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She lay upon the shores of Lake Michigan
    looking far into what seemed to be forever
    a forever that was adorned in
    questions whose sentences ended in periods
    and she was unsure why things seemed
    so final / void of answers
    .....she set her tears on a journey
    amongst the rush of the lake to seek
    out why things seemed so final
    finality was hard for her....her
    first love gone without reason...
    maybe she would find him during another
    season during another climate
    during another mood
    in another lifetime with an
    answer to ease her soul.

    (c)2001 blakverb
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    MAN VERY TOUCHING

    IT AMAZE ME AS I WENT THERE ......
     
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    first love's endings...

    first love's endings are hard
    veterans know there are new beginnings
    but the rookie
    ...the innocent of heart
    are torn apart
    by the tragedy of love
    and the heartache they never thought of
    so
    they spend their after days
    looking out over lake michigan
    deep in their misery...they wait
    for answers to sorrows
    to which, they cannot relate

    her heart
    constricted
    by so much pain
    the tears
    they come
    again and again

    she sat
    ...stared
    into forever that day
    wishing for last words
    she wanted him to say
    but those words didn't come
    just emptiness inside
    alas, upon this shore
    she cried and cried

    as tear drops mix
    with the open sea
    she raised her eyes
    and looked at thee.

    answer her, B.

    'TIS A SAD PORTRAIT YOU'VE PAINTED HERE, Blak. which of us can't put SELF in her shoes?:(
     
  4. UbZoRbShUn

    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    verb

    It's like you took my October and rewrote my bluz... 1 4 3 and that's real





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    ** this melted my heart**

    i am absolutely touched :heart:

    pd
     
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