Black Poetry : Her Family Scar

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  1. MsInterpret

    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Inspired by a young girl I met in the juvenile detention center

    Her Family Scar by ME

    It's not her fault
    but she thinks it is
    taking something
    what wasn't really his
    He comes in the dark
    Being cautious
    to not leave a mark
    But inside she is scarred
    She feels there's nothing to guard
    Her eyes maybe closed
    But her body is exposed
    to a man she calls father
    it's a shame that she is his daughter


     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    who has da rites to an virgin
    no-one !!!!
    sad tale in life of a child who has to accept da mask of such story
    and left scared within deeply , well felt piece here that cuts deep.
     
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    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I know...Poor girl is having a rough time...I really do pray for her and all the other children who are victimized by monsters

     
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    yes these the kind of low-life men who need to be lifeless of less of a center piece
    to even use ever again ............they need them cut off to the nubby !


    sad sad sad !!!
     
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    Your work does us good

    Flow-On!
     
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    This packs a heartfelt punch...

    Such twisted beings need to have their own island far away from all societies.


    Put it out there... its not always a stanger who steals innocence.


    Feelin'itsouldeep!
    Coco
     
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    Thank you very much for telling and sharing her story. :bowdown:

    Too often these horrors done to our children are ignored, swept under the rug or denied.
     
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    *whistles*... wow God bless this girl. As for dad, should we pray for him?

    very short, real and moving.
     
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    MsInterpret Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    A prayer never hurts

     
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