Black Poetry : Her English Class

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by howardtsu, Feb 11, 2008.

  1. howardtsu

    howardtsu Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    does it take pent up emotion

    to write and ocean

    of poetry

    or does it take a gent missing her Revlon lotion

    to take insight out of the motion of words

    while manipulating adjectives and adverbs

    plus maybe a little help from her Hodges Harbrace

    to develop a floetry

    light enough to remind myself how sweet it could be if she thought i deserved

    her attention



    love,

    howard
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I suppose it takes all of that Howard, and surely you've gotten her attention, and more.
     
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    Hi Howard
    Yes you are right on key
    It's the flow of your words from the heart
    that will give you that awesome Term paper
    awesome

    Peace~N~Love
     
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