Black Poetry : HER BLUES.........

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Her heart sings the blues…
    Hopin love will hear the echo
    Of her tears….the clouds cover
    as the storm gets
    A little tougher and the
    winds becomes more rougher…
    heart so bitter
    turnin to stone as she
    cries her blues….
    aches from the pain she
    no longer can bare…
    she cries from her heart…
    as her soul folds…….
    she drops down in
    pain for it runs her insane
    to wonderin
    and searchin…..
    why is it always her…
    hurtin from the inside out
    then he walks in….
    his love sings like a
    melencholy melody of a
    heavenly gift he walks in and
    turn it all around
    mendin her
    healin her…
    touchin her….
    Understandin her…
    lovin her from the
    very start ……..
    With his charm ….
    wipes her
    Bleedin heart..and
    took her hand..
    Helpin her to spread
    her wingz…
    love so strong and
    the vision so clear
    she gives
    up the key….but in
    a different way....
    she felt the love
    that was so true
    And falls to loves call…
    completely.......
    a magical
    Bliss took a hold and
    allowed her to release
    the beauty she holds
    when she is in love…
    and a tear of joy
    began to flow............................




    to be continued…..

    pieces of untitle life
    a blackangel thang.....
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is a true piece of beauty, my sistah. what an intense flow! embrace it all. peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    well done feelin da heart
    sing in tune
    da love within da room
    her love she vow
    is sweet and mild
    her smile is a glo
    her voice heard
    from da words
    tyte scribe of deep emotions
     
  4. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    gempis..thank you that means alot wow.... :grouphug:

    her love sweet and meek
    she feels the room as
    her love roams...
    but hope he feels the same...
    for this time she ready....

    $$RICH$$...thanks for your reply means alot...
    your support means alot:angel1:

    a magical
    Bliss took a hold and
    allowed her to release
    the beauty she holds
    when she is in love…
    and a tear of joy
    began to flow............................
    and he was there to catch it.....
    for the first time she
    began to believe again
    and that the world wasnt so cruel...
    as she embraced this new love
    a tear of joy
    began to flow............................
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    reads so much like I feel i held my breath til i got to the end, please continue so I know how my life ends.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Randee..lol..thanks for the love.... good luck :luv:
     
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    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    peace to u mzblkangel
    this flow is absolutely beautiful
    love is and can be a beautiful thang :)
    fa sho!!! let it flow... let it flow...

    peace & blessings
    nadia*binta
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    NADIA*BINTA :thanks: for da love...
     
  9. PositiveMindset

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    Love found....

    D**n, I wish I had someone 2 love cuz it's a splendidly wonderful thing.

    Very nice.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PositiveMindset i guess in time...we all will
    but for now love thy self....i dunno
    thanks for reading n support...means alot:angel1:
     
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