Black Poetry : HER BACK AND BOOTY

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  1. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ... enjoy :glasses:

    HER BACK AND BOOTY

    It was at the intersection of time and opportunity we found ourselves
    Destined to be the perfect 24, we were two twelve’s -
    Counted from a period in our lives that was leading up to this -
    A jar of cocoa butter and moments of naked bliss
    She lay forward on her belly unveiling a marvelous revealing
    Her beautiful back and *** are exposed and facing the ceiling
    Leaving me with a stare on my face before coming back to my senses
    For the skin I’m about to touch feels as good, if not better than warm water rinses
    Anxious fingers skim the top layer of cocoa butter that’s been undisturbed
    Breaking the virgin layer of soft scented white chocolate gelatin with actions undeterred
    Deliberate and on purpose is the surplus of anticipation
    With the massaging of her back crossing the line of infatuation
    It was a moment that my carnal urges were led astray
    Converging with a willingness to rub and relax her tensions away
    This wasn’t so much a stolen moment as it was a time of delicate duty
    It was an opportunity, a jar of cocoa butter, and her back and booty

    I put my oiled palms to her back and booty and proceeded with a measured stride
    And felt the tension in tense muscles that were impossible to hide
    Loosening up a lady who loves lingering relaxation
    With fingers oiled and aching to touch this woman of fascination
    Phalanges firmly feeling the muscles in her back and her behind
    By design she melts like the cocoa butter in these fingers of mine
    As she lay forward on her stomach with arms folded and her head to the side
    This was our time, our moment … our place to abide
    Surrounded by four walls, in the bed of our consummation
    We convene in a congress of sorts, cogitating and consultation
    In a conversation, not spoken with words as such
    But in a dialogue understood by the talk of touch
    My cocoa buttered hands oiled and ready to touch every cranny and knack
    Anxious is she for me to put my hands on her *** and back
    Ready to coat her back and butt with a cocoa butter’s sheen
    And rub away any tension that’s there to make her mean

    Cocoa butter fingers ran the length of her back and booty
    As she loosened up and gave me more of herself to moments that were to be
    One second bleeding into the next as time would gently pass
    I’m straddled on the back of her upper thighs just below the base of her ***
    As I’m rubbing her body down, my attention is victimized
    By a full and voluptuous *** that has me hypnotized
    I knead it like a baker handling dough, without confidence shed
    With an experience better to me than the smell of fresh backed bread
    The aroma of cocoa butter permeates our quarters as if not yet -
    The dominant scent in our space is that our hot chocolate
    Underscored by glandular signatures unmistakable to love making connoisseurs
    Pheromones to catalyze the actions of love making doers
    I can smell her ‘center piece’ as it calls in scents, nice and warm
    Kind of the way bees are called to arms as they amass in a swarm
    Olfactorial familiarity of such things jog my sense of smell
    Taking my mind to a place inside of her that I will soon dwell

    With my hands to her back and booty we establish a sensual union
    With fingertips on her spine we’re having tactilian communion
    Exploring her physique like the conquistadors explored the everglades
    Spreading butter on her behind and the small of her back … up to her shoulder blades
    Like expert fingers to a piano, I touch and she responds with proficiency
    Hands on well placed parts of her frame – anesthetized – she sufficiently -
    Calms down like palms downed and humbled by hurricane force winds
    Writhing and slithering to the touch in a way in which no one pretends
    “Umm hmm” is the hymn she hums as I oil her body down
    With hands made for just such a moment I rub and massage the noun -
    That is the body feminine, and warm, and soft
    That begs me to proceed in frequency and in oft
    I thumb press the muscles in between her scapula and spine
    The symmetry of which makes me comment to myself “how divine”
    Working my way down to plump and pretty butt cheeks that are craving to be handled
    Already unclothed like pedicured feet that are beautifully un-sandaled

    Her back and booty are the manipulatives with which my fingers play
    Handling and molding her frame as if it were sculptors clay
    And with the slow churning of her hips exposing her pleasure zone
    I spread her cheeks, and insert a ‘plaything’ of my own
    As the almond slit of her ***** peeks through beckoning gluteal lobes
    I feel the inclination of natural urgency to implant my complementary probe
    Where upon penetration, the sensation of moving past labial walls exhilarates me
    Maneuvered and mounted, coupled in coitus with ecstasy that awaits me
    The feel on the down stroke is what sets my satisfactions ablaze
    With subsequent motions that never cease to amaze
    As the sound of feminine grunts softly rise to my ears
    Having morphed into a formidable **** from which neither of us veers
    And just as bees go to colors that have tints of violet
    My hands are on her waist and my hips on auto-pilot
    As I pump, bump and grind into the well of her depths
    We stir up a rhythm so that we synchronize the taking of deep breaths

    Her back and booty is my focus as I merge with my lady friend
    Penetrating lush labial lavishings time and again
    Face down and *** up is her posture all the while I am employing -
    Age old techniques of coitus of which she’s very much enjoying
    I am now her rain cloud, as sweat falls from my pores
    Dew drops hitting her back and booty, salting one of many scores –
    Of moments of ecstatic movement, feel and orgasmic reprieve
    Having the mad passionate sex as had by Adam and Eve
    I’m riding her back like a naked horseman on a horse in galloping stride
    Holding on to my baby as we take each other for a ride
    Heaving and heavy breathing, relieving much stress
    Yin and Yang are in perfect balance while I’m embedded in my seductress
    Her ***** feels so **** good as I watch her arch her spine
    Not to mention the cushion that is her soft and [now] well oiled behind
    That is the pillow of prominence which provides and added diversion
    Smacking it with the front of my body is this, our sexual excursion

    Holding firmly an area between her back and her booty
    Holding her fast, as she recoils back into me
    As I smack her *** with my pelvis, which makes her backbone slip
    Amongst the jolting and the jostling, she’s biting her bottom lip
    She says “**** me harder” and I oblige her request
    With the arch in her back I just couldn’t contest
    I surrender – as does she – to moments of primal lust
    As our bodies smack together in a desperate moments must
    Sounding as if someone’s smacking the bottom of a jar to get to the contents inside
    Our need for ejaculatory release is so great our bodies collide -
    In a series of repeated collisions that jars her frame
    Causing her *** to bounce and wiggle like jello on a shaky table – without shame
    Pushing ourselves to limits and boundaries to which we’re spent
    To experience a release that has to be heaven sent
    As our erogenous areas rub each other the right way noting can take its place
    She clutches the bed sheets with both hands, as I don a grimace on my face

    With her back and booty moving in tandem the actions of intercourse are slick
    She is the proverbial flame on the end of my candle stick
    As we both year, burn and churn on a doggy-style kick
    I’m making love to her *****, and she’s making love to my dick
    The mutual masturbation that is called sexual intercourse
    Carries with it a compulsion that is the driving force
    Of me holding on to her hips as I extract honey from her hive
    Along with the way that she’s moving her ***, making me glad to be alive
    We move together like a machine well tuned and synchronized
    Clothed only in our skin and attached at the genitals our actions seem to rise -
    To another plateau as she begs for one last nut
    And I oblige as I hold her hips, and spy her back and her butt
    I feel familiar spasms and I begin to call her name
    So in synch in purpose she starts to feel the same
    In simultaneity we nut, culminating in orgasmic- ejaculatory bliss
    And as I lay next to my baby, I’m still rubbing the back and booty of this musing miss

    Written by: K-JiO
    © 2009
     
  2. $$RICH$$

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    awesome ...Brother garlicsalt99 in light of it all we love to see the deeper version
    but to post a link in every post you would have to be an Premium member to do so
    this is a violation of rule #5
    http://destee.com/forums/showthread.php?t=8084

    With that said i do ask that you not add anymore links with your poetic art of creation
    we love what you bring and do but a rule is a rule brother

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  3. cherryblossom

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    GarlicSalt, you are a master of imagery! You set the SCENE, the TONE, and WARM SENSATIONS!
     
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    My knees are clinched tightly together and I too am biting my lip. wow, gonna need a sponge for this one. Great write!:terrific:
     
  5. Tiana

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    why did they censor u? aint yo grown? im confused but that was freaky lol fun & freaky i could use a booty massage LOL but I aint exactly blessed dere ah well hot $hyt
     
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    My sister would pick this one to respond to lol @ tiana smh

    Brother gsalt ummmm part of me wonders how much of this is personal testimony lol

    cause whomever is the inspiration of this is a busy cat lol

    I aint mad at ya lol do you brotha
     
  7. garlicsalt99

    garlicsalt99 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Tiana ... rules are rules. Consider the censorship as something to leave a lil' suh'in to the imagination :) I ain't mad though

    Triniti424 ... some people choose to write about the things that captures their attention ...take a wild guess at what captures mine ... c'mon, take a guess, lmao. Believe it or not, I'm single -no, not single as in playa' playa' man, but single as in just working on getting myself together. If I was in a relationship, I don't think I could write like this ... this would probably be a reason to break up (I'll leave you to figure that one out)

    cherryblossom ... imagery is the operative theme here. If you read words and can't see what's being said, it just makes for a boring read :)

    $$RICH$$ ... you are almost always amongst the first to respond to my "way out" rhymes. You're very supportive. Destee couldn't have picked a more suited moderator for her team.

    Thank you all for the read. There will be more, you can count on it :)
     
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    Sweet baby_face Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    OH MY,MY, MY!!!!
    Is it hot in here or is it me?
     
  9. triniti424

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    I believe you brotha lol

    I dont know that erotic poetry is a reason to break up brotha Gsalt but its definitely a reason to make her blush :lol:

    And I dont think a wild guess is necessary :lol: you got some of our sistahs up in this joint hot and bothered :laugh:
     
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