Black Poetry : help me search

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by $$RICH$$, Jun 22, 2004.

  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    she was the
    mission of dreams
    the gallop of
    silent screams
    her hair was in
    da nappy rolls
    fingers painted
    of lovely gold
    her skin was mixed
    wit honey & coco
    brown
    voice light as da sound
    she pose an essence
    so sweet when she touch
    it was soft & meek
    her beauty lights up
    da night like starz
    glazin bright
    her smile was warm as
    summer she cry tears
    like spring rain
    she been missing so long
    i searched what went wrong
    have u seen her
    where can she be
    somebody please help me
    she cook up a love so hot
    she makes a man heart stop
    she wrap her emotions
    around ya mind
    she is sweet & divine
    she is my desire that lights
    dis humble fire
    hold a bliss of rapture
    that's never captured
    have u seen her
    as i claim her moment
    inside da reasons
    she was my humble 4
    seasons of gentlness
    in search of a mystery
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i see she sumpthin speical :spinstar:
    hope you find her
    i let ya know if i pass her
    likes this drop
    :angel1:
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Don't know where she is...probably right behind you, perhaps she's your shadow, maybe she's in your dreams, in your mind, in your heart....not sure....if I see her, I'll let you know.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    hey angel u know her
    u been around her
    and u touched her thoughts
    so i know u can fine her
    tell her to come back home
    please !

    watz.....................
    u been round her
    u too saw her once
    u talked to her
    yeah u know her so
    tell her i love her
    and come back home
    please !
     
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    Harry Hyman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich-You ask a question and saddle it to an arrow of words hoping to hit a target of Love. Very nice theme. Great work,HH
    P.S.-I'll look for her too ! HH
     
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    A wildflower
    with the scent of essence so deep
    in search of the one
    who hold the key to heart
    just as you are looking
    she is looking too
    has anyone seem any clues
    yes she is searching to
    just as he is searching
    Peace

    BlueWater:heart:
     
  7. innerbeauty

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    she cook up a love so hot
    she makes a man heart stop
    she wrap her emotions
    around ya mind
    she is sweet & divine
    This sounds alot like me, do i know you? Just kidding, this is really nice.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    HH.......man let me know if u cross her
    please tell her i miss da love she pose
    Thanks man .....

    Bluewater ......
    she looking too for the dream of her heart
    i'm near , i'm here from da start fine her
    please tell her to come home i need my mate.
    Thankz sistah

    innerbeauty................
    is it u sweetie hummmm!
    if so come home gurl
    if not and u see her tell her
    to call me i love her
    Thankz for the stop in

    HAVE ANYONE SEEN HER YET?????
     
  9. angelicsage

    angelicsage Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nice...
    Brother...I'm wondering
    if something this wonderful
    has even been created yet...
    but she must...if you've seen it...
    wow...
    Nice flow... :toast:
     
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    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heck, Ill put on my glasses now....:coffee: tight floe
     
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