Black Poetry : Help Help Help.....i,m Shut!

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by LibertyLady, Feb 23, 2003.

  1. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I,m bleeding ..
    bleeding fast...
    i feel like i,m almost
    death!

    my heart is there laying on the ground.
    lord please put it back where it belongs..

    Not because i wrote yesterday a positive
    poem means i,m right on track..
    put it BACK!
    put it BACK!

    I,m bleeding..
    what did i do wrong!!!!!!?
    i gave love
    i gave love
    How long will this go on
    put it BACK!
    please..... lord let it never happen again.
    Put ME BACK!
    PUT ME BACK!
    with everything i was
    with everyting i am

    I,m bleeding!
    bleeding FAST!..
    IT FELD HE WAS THE ONE!
    now it hurts so bad..

    Let the one who comes next
    be the one that will last....
    untill than Lord
    please...

    PUT it Back!
     
  2. Destee

    Destee destee.com STAFF

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    sssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
    now now Sweetie
    breathe slowly
    feel God
    He is there
    sssssssshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

    i could feel your urgency in this peace

    nice work LibertyLaida

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  3. Dream Weaver

    Dream Weaver Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Open the window!!

    Hey u need to open a window. Don't let his closed door bother you, keep your window open, and someone better will come along. I felt exactly like you the other day, pick up your heart, dust it (dust him off) and put it right back where it belongs:heart:
     
  4. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely what u feel is not of what it seem
    within deep it's already their
    he placed it in yo sleep
    now wit his faith given unto u
    u can smell the fresh air as it mend
    with great power u pose
    lean on me sista for i shall stand beside u
    come now hush !
    relax
    and be whom u r .
     
  5. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    dust him off........ ???
    it feels like he,s tatto,ted there (m?tattu)
    better....i dont know...
    hope so
    but thanks anyway..dream much love

    desthee thanks....yes only god can put it back...and he is there
    but its hurts i,m wounded
     
  6. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich thats sweet of you.....
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    what's of me is in u
    free ya mind
    the rest will follow

    he that stand in yo way
    is a myth
    forth u are not alone

    surely da power of GOD
    shall bring forth a love
    ya heart will bare

    breathe again !
     
  8. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    he put it back ..

    other wise i would,t be posting this lol...


    But for how long Huh?
    it a thing made of flesh and blood...it has life...
    and it can be damadge again...
    well ..thats Life...

    but yes yes rich ..lord heals
     
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    aww i like this....
    but come now...
    it be ok ...
    i pray that he
    do send someone...
    forever more...
     
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    God has been good (as usual) becuase now you know what hurt is you can look forward to Love feelin like LOVE :)
     
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