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  1. daroc

    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ok... so im tired of my style of writin... and the way i write.. i dont like the level im on.... i kno some people have told me.. it comes easier and better when ur spirituallity is stronger.. cus he tells u wat to rite and helps u... and then some say... growth and all that stuff comes wit time... and if i continue writing .. in some years ill be on other levels... and i guess u can jus say im either bored wit my style or inpatience... and i sit up here.. at this computer and read all these poems and be like... dang.. i likes that.. y cant i make it feel smooth like that.. or make it seem like the words are creatin they own dream... now i might be feelin this way cuz its my own stuff... but i dont kno... so im lookin fo some advice... from all yall poets out thurr.. if u aint read my stuff.. please dont be lazy and go find somin.. if not then jus give me some advice off the dome... on what u have done or somin.... give me somin.... please.. my pen is on one knee... beggin fo some advice... jus somin..lol
     
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    surely your style is sweet and alwayz u are your worse fold
    i learn to write in many styles shapes and forms from my deep
    mental vision as it clash with my creativity to create what type
    of style are u looking to bring ya poetic flow out of ?
     
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    daroc Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    after some thot i figure everyone can help me not jus premium members so is there anyway this thread can be moved and keep the response...

    thanks rish fo da advice... ima come back to ur question when i find a reall aswer
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    not sure sistah this the place for premium members but you can go to the
    forum ( Books - writting - poetry discussion) and post it for all to see and
    help , know that writting poetry come from your inner self and visional
    creativity from what u see hear and many images the emotions you pose
    ya spiritual , mental it's a combo of many i'll try to help you reach a new
    creativity and style of what i know but surely there are many others who
    can help raise your level .
     
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    thanks rich ur words surely ease my pen
     
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    most welcome sistah just sit back in your own space open ya mind
    to inner feelings and let it mix to a creation poeticly i'll help as much
    as i can to raise your level as i did with others before but relax ......
     
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    daroc...
    if you don't like it...CHANGE IT
    i can't tell you how or to what...that comes in your own decision to CHANGE..
    I do believe...sometimes the hardest part of writing is in the editing...
    i wish you mucho luck...in the change..
    it will be good tho...because it will come from you...
     
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    when you change it will you change it to something that i can understand? :wink:
     
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    Well when I first started posting here, I felt the same way. I was impatient. I still am a little but I learned to appreciate where I'm at. The better you get I think the more responsibility you have. For me when I write it's a standard I set for my self and until every one of my poems reach that standard, I don't share and I get frustrated because I know it will be acceptable in man's eyes but God has given me this gift and I know he won't be pleased. It's just a feeling I get. Like my wirting is above a certain level. I can't get away with just writing any ol thing. Where as before I didn't get this feeling. I think a poet's writing get's better with their wisdom. I've learned alot and using what I learned my writing has improved greatly. It also I think have to do with your attitude towards things. If you force it and want everything here and now. your work will be sloppy because you have to give your self time and space to grow and evolve. Hope this helps you.

    Poetic sista
     
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