Black Poetry : hello...

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by baller, Oct 15, 2001.

  1. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WHO IS SHE?

    i asked of another
    questions
    i should have asked
    YOU

    i've been wait'n
    ...anticipat'n what
    HELLO
    would be like
    if i stepped to YOU

    ARE YOU MARRIED?

    i know
    i've stepped all up in your
    BIZNIZ
    but i had to risk it
    the caramel flava
    of you
    had me reeling

    i needed to know
    WHO ARE YOU?

    "why didn't you approach me
    ...i'm approchable."
    she said as we sat...conversating
    "i'm forty-one
    ...divorced
    and attainable"
    she stated

    "are you leaving
    just now
    can we talk for a while
    if you wanna know
    ANYTHING
    just ask..."
    she said
    with a smile

    i asked for the digits
    ...got her pager instead
    "that's cool, SISTAH QUEEN"
    i finally said

    "i'm old skool
    big balla
    i expect nothing less"
    she said
    when i called
    to discover the rest

    can you romance a sistah
    wine and dine ALL her needs
    can you speak to her mental
    attend her heart
    with ease

    are you A REAL MAN, baller
    have i been looking for you
    can you love ONE, TRUE SISTAH
    can i depend on YOU

    CAN I?"

    i've been wait'n
    ...anticipat'n
    what
    HELLO
    would be like
    if i stepped to you.

    now, i know

    as i clear the pathway
    of yesterday's cobwebs
    caused by failed relationships

    i see tomorrow
    clearly.

    HELLO.:)
     
  2. Kitana

    Kitana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is sweet and romantic....

    that look..that feelin we get from the first look..can't wait to get lost inside the beauty of it all...

    K
     
  3. cocobutterskyn

    cocobutterskyn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Baller,

    This is a very nice flow. I want more:D

    Madd Sistahly Love:heart:
    CCBSKYN
     
  4. baller

    baller Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THANKS for feeling me...

    and for the read.
     
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    shaneak Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    this is so Sweet...

    Atleast you got a chance to make things right!!! Clearing the cobwebs let you see the road alot more clearer...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    BALLER

    ya jumpin' off extreme style wit da romantic flava....:toast:
     
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