Quiet Poetry Lounge : Hello Out There

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Eisha, Nov 12, 2003.

  1. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello out there can you hear me,
    Do you choose to listen, do you take in empathy.
    Am I a mear image, am I simply ignored,
    Do you choose to isolate me, are you closing my door.
    If I commit a crime, would I bring attention,
    Would anyone even want it to be mentioned?

    Hello out there can you see me,
    I'm standing in your sight, can you address me, please.
    I may not have money and I maybe rich in my heart,
    But your tormenting ignorance is tearing me apart.
    What is the dillema, do you find me inferior,
    Why do you turn away, you create a mirror.
    I shouldn't have to say that you think of yourself superior.
    This wasn't a question, its a statement, do you choose to see?
    Its okay to recall your actions, your dirty looks are free.

    Hello out there is there any excuse to ignore me indeed,
    What type of generation do you want to lead.
    Your underestimation is causing scars,
    Far worse than criminals put behind bars.
    Is this the world you want to create, is this your plan?
    A child needs a positive guiding hand.

    Hello out there this is my last request,
    Which do you think is best.
    Ignoring the sound of my voice, turning me invisible,
    Starting a new generation with you own set of rules.
    You calculate the math and follow what it leads up to,
    So, what about it, are you still cruel?
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nicely posed..
    i hear ya..keep on flowin...
    :angel1:
     
  3. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhh my young Eisha
    this is so beautiful
    Hello...I do hear you
    Much love to you:heart:
    on this devine flow
    Peace
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    lovely drop feelin ya vibes
    keep flowin
     
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    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This is so tight! Eisha, you have a lot of talent.
     
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    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Feeling ya flow, keep it coming!
     
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    ...I know the feeling .......Youre like :wave:


    and .... :wave:....................



    and like ................................:wave: :wave: :wave:




    any way....welcome Poet :smile: :wave: i like youre flow
     
  8. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you everyone for all the love.
     
  9. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I hear you Eisha, and I'm glad I did. If you're this talented now, look out world!
     
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