Black Poetry : Hello night-light

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello night-light
    Under the moon
    My soul is so cold
    Screaming inside
    For I want to fight
    Just let it go….
    Hello sadness
    Hello loneliness
    As the fear burns me down
    My heart swells and my tears run
    But then I have
    The joy and the peace
    The warmth of love..
    That feed in my veins….
    He is the sweetest thing I know
    Candlelights
    Wine, by the fireplace
    In the bedroom
    In the shower
    Unlike no other
    He feeds my passion
    Place my desires as his
    And folds me in
    As he inflames our love
    Like a midnight star
    Shooting across the air…
    Two into one
    Untouchable bliss
    Hello joy
    Hello love
    As the night air carries us
    Our love is so free
    As my heart tremble
    He holds it tight
    Night after night
    As the gap
    Close…
    I feel him pulling me
    Closer
    ……….Closer
    As I surrender within his love
    Hello…

    (C) 2004​
     
  2. PurpleMoons

    PurpleMoons Administrator STAFF

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    awww! this ones brings a smile!
    What a lovely drop!

    Loving it sis!
     
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    Very warm and endearing, anyone would want a love like this.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling da bliss
    of her twist
    my heart hoover
    into a maze
    like da fire of desires
    as i lights dem low
    night lights glow
    as we dance cross
    da flo on the
    moonshine of love
    dis was awesome tyte
     
  5. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    PurpleMoons....happy it brought a smile...thanks for the love n supporton dis

    watzinaname...thanks for the love on dis

    $$RICH$$...
    lights dem low as we move within
    the moon glow Untouchable bliss
    Hello!!!!!
    thank you for the love on dis...
    and i likes the flow.... :blush:

    Peace
    Angel
     
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    Sister girl!!!!!... :hot:

    I'm loving it...^5

    this peace...was like whoa

    and as you said in your last stanza...

    "Hello"... :hot:

    you did ya thang on this one girl...
     
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    MBA you always represent. This was nothing but sweet...what love truly is
     
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    sweetbrownsugar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I like this piece. Hello night light indeed.
     
  9. gempis

    gempis Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heyyyy, this is a lovely vision of hope and faith, sister. So pretty.
     
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    triniti424 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Awwwwwwwwwwww HES YOUR NIGHT LIGHT!!!!
    that is so cute sista *giggles* umm so uhhh how tall IS your night light QQ hehehe
     
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