Black Poetry : Hello,My Darkskin Sistah

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  1. SensualReality

    SensualReality Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    "Hello."
    She said in the sweetest voice and picked a chair of her choice
    "What may I do for you ma'am."
    She looked around the place and settled on a white face
    "I want that hairstyle,not too wild."
    She took off her bandana and grabbed out a banana
    "Ma'am this relaxer may burn some because you've been scratchin."
    She replied,"I don't care,hopefully it'll do somethin to my nappy hair."
    The woman got to work with her tools
    Pumped her foot and sat on a stool
    Applied the mayonaise,that would soon turn the ladies hair straight
    "How do you like it,everything's the way you wanted?"
    She looked at her hair in the glass and whispered,"alas."
    "I'll take some makeup too,the real light kind and blue."
    "Ma'am,I don't think that color will look right on you."
    She snatched the makeup and started from the neck up
    After putting on her mask she headed past the mass
    "Goodbye ladies and have a great day,tonight I have a date."
    Arriving at the place where she would soon say grace
    She met the man who set the plan
    "What happend to you,boo?"
    She frowned and looked confused,like those were the wrong words used.
    "What are you talkin' bout?"
    She asked and began to pout
    "Baby,you changed and I'm not sure I like this new arrange."
    She thought it was cute to be someone else
    With her light makeup,straight hair,and dress from Belk's
    He wanted the free afrocentric woman he met at The Galaxy
    "Hello,my darkskin sistah,or boo,but this ain't you."
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head this was str8 off da hook flowing
     
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    thanx Rich
     
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    There are those who appreciate the real inside story, I liked the way this flowed, keep them coming.
     
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    (so you have a Belk in Tennessee...)

    like the message in this...
    gotta love you...for you
    because the skin that your in
    is a beautiful hue...

    nice piece...
     
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    thanks for the love i havent been able to reply because i've been out of town :thanks: :toast:
     
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    welcome back home happy to read u again
     
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