Black Poetry : Hell taking applications- Help wanted.......

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by nevar, Aug 11, 2006.

  1. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So your laughing at my title
    Listen sweety this is the next American Idol

    The devil is looking for new souls
    Souls that he love to control

    Looking for theives, murderers, anybody that do harm
    Give you riches as he reeling you in with his charm

    As you shake hands with the devil
    Guess what the otha suckers is digging your spot with a shovel

    Waiting patiently for your return
    And once you go it will be "Let it Burn"

    For you let greed, power, money get the best of you
    Faced with prison, family lost comtemplating what to do

    He want all the unrighteous to stay with him forever
    Till now and endeavor
    Devil mighty clever

    Temptation oh I know quite well
    Hell ain't a place I want to dwell
    But um can I ask you what is hell

    Can we honestly say that we know it exist
    With all what he's offering its not hard to resist

    I'm living in Hell as we speak
    Been done wrong so many times my cheeks

    Are scared
    Life been barred

    From recieving salvation
    Cant see my soul in damnation

    Thats why I won't be putting in my bid no time soon
    why cause

    Hell taking applications- Help wanted!!!!!!!!!!
     
  2. soulFAreal

    soulFAreal Active Member MEMBER

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    Brothas and Sista WAKE UP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    fine piece..............:welldone:
     
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    sweettee29 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THAT WAS ON POINT SISTAH! GREAT JOB

    MUCH MUCH LOVE SWEETTEE29
     
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    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Some powerful words sister, we need to take heed.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    I can't apply
    why cause da devil
    a lie
    this a soul he can't have
    nor will he control
    because i am from above
    the clay he mold

    This was right on the head strong and on point speak on sis !
     
  6. Tha-Emissary

    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Well they definitely won't be getting my resume. I think you done a brilliant work with this piece. You given us some real soulfood and I applaud your talent. Keep on spreading the good word sista!
     
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    asimplepoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I really love your style. A wonderful flo that spreads the good news. This was definitely a :welldone: drop cuz.
     
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    Sometimes we're filling out the application and don't even realize it, cause Hell is made to look like Eden. Lovin the message and the crafty style.
     
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    Very Nice Nevar.. deep and thought provoking too.
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    um

    did you just go deep on me girl
    dang wow you came from left field this

    let me find out you are deep deep like me

    lol
     
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