Black Poetry : Hell On Earth

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Lyrics hit the minds of the weak
    So guys that pack nine's can see deafeat
    Like my name was Jesse/Plenty jacksons as I begin to preach
    If you looking for love/you gotta dig deep
    King of the ring when im knocking out your teeth
    Whats beef?? Beef is when yo asz cant breath
    Your lungs cant stand/Hypothermia/and you land own your knees
    Whats defeat?? Defeat is when I see you
    And you see me/The guns start blarin the streets
    Underdog is a word from gutter I came
    War of the worlds in the gutter I raised
    I told tom I never cruise im a die in a blaze
    Yet the glory dont hit until the Lord makes way
    I hope he got more room for a thugg these days
    My life so craze/stuck on what I see today
    Too much tv/I sware/It must be me
    Stereotypical killer/dressed in black hoodies
    Yup/Life aint never no dam goodie
    Plastered the bastards for all too see
    I aint the white boy/Who gettin tuff off of MTV
    These my streets/Im a KING in the C-H-I
    Live Let Die/Naw dogg/thats my life
    Like hell on earth/I remeber with no food to eat
    My momma wouldnt eat/Just to feed us three
    Shiit digs deep/I cant believe/She loves me
    I was a devil/In these windy streets/Lord help me
    I reminisce like it was so healthy/My mind wont sleep
    Until I repent my sins/Drink my GIn
    I think I know why I drink my Gin
    Fifths again to drown my dam Hell On Earth
    Lost my dam job/My gurl just gave birth
    And really to be honest/Thats not the worst you heard
    I tried to kill myself/Thats not the worst you heard
    I struggled so dam much/I let my gurl do hers
    Cheat with other men/Have sex on curbs
    My son has to eat/What the fucc you heard
    You got some nerves judging/Then you feed my kid
    I got the butter and the cheese/Just to feed my kids
    The office had mercy/Let me come again/and again/and again
    I cried so dam much/I cant stand how it feels
    To have nothing and go to something
    Then go back to nothing/The struggle is something
    But what more can I do/Im just as bad as I judge
    Give my self to you Lord/Can you hear me above??
    My Hell On Earth

    Yo this is real shiit here
    Its a lot of us struggling
    Going through these issues
    This isnt my life/Nor do I glorify it
    Yet there is an understanding
    That we all struggle in some form or another
    Stay United/Black/& Focused

    Sincerly,
    Tantrum "Last Of MY Kind"
     
  2. nevar

    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i like this hell on earth flow on poet, keep up the good work as always.:kiss1:
     
  3. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You Sister Nevar
    Just trying to enlighten
    Mych Love 2 You Sister
    AS you continue to spread LOve
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I loved it!:kiss1:
     
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    this hell on earth
    woman downfall is to have painful birth

    to see thorn and thistle grow
    to forever walking in the land of the unknown

    why adam couldnt turn away
    just the thought of never growing old to this day

    love for thy woman made his heart gro weak
    to him in his lord he should seek

    but now he have to live in this hell on earth
    to gro poisoned food into this rotten dirt
    still i unearthed

    i feel
    i must reveal

    the reason

    Hell is on Earth!!!!!!!!!!!
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    THank You Cursed Heart
    Sister Nevar Yes Hell On Earth
    A powerful everyday struggle
    For men and woman-Much Love Poets
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    true indeed there are millions struggling, fighting to stay alive
    this spill a massive message to the minds
     
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    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank You For the
    Love Brother $$RICH$$
    Its a cycle we can hopefully
    Break within our communities
     
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    yo this ish here reminded me of some mobb deep ish...
    good ish poet...word

    one love
    khasm
     
  10. phenomenalwoman

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    OK! There is nothing that I love more a dose of reality dropped like its hot. You did your thang. Good job
     
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