Black Poetry : Hell On Earth

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Cursed,
    Man lost his shirt
    Run and put yer clothes on

    Worst,
    It's Hell on Earth
    All because you've gone wrong

    Waging war to do more harm
    Dumbing down of nuclear arms

    Check it out... (we forgot)
    What? (You're about)

    Birthed,
    To get it right
    Copyright on trying

    First,
    We're well rehearsed
    Ain't no sense in dying

    Go ahead and make My day
    Like I made the Milky Way 1 time ~

    Holla back ...
    Cause Exact!

    Haste is...
    Making waste
    Succumbing to destruction

    Pace,
    To our disgrace
    Helluva corruption

    Saving face ain't got no place
    Being in the human race

    Nursed,
    On every verse
    The devil is a liar...

    Worst,
    It's Hell on Earth
    No time for denial

    Waging war denying God
    Dumbing down of karma's law

    Check it out... (who forgot)
    What we're about?

    STOP!


    Darryl Abdu Omari :grin:
    aka 1poetsought ~ copyright 2005
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    to the point on Q.............
    man i hear ya on dis one
     
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    'copyright on trying'

    OO! That line is ridiculous! You got a way of writing to the moon and stars, brotha.
     
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    ^5 loves this vibe...oh yeah diggin it
     
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    Sometimes I think we make our own hell without even realizing until it all breaks lose. Keep doing your thang poet.
     
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    Great piece sends a message to me that you better live right cause death comes like a thief in the night. We all seek to hear well done good and faithful servant. Keep turning out the fire 1poet...

    Ase'
     
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    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Sometimes we just don't get it.

    Thanks for that rare, endangered commodity called LOVE.
     
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    Waging war denying God
    Dumbing down of karma's law


    tyte jiz-noint son.....

    one love
    khasm
     
  9. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Khasm,

    You reap what you sow, bro.
     
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    re:Earth

    1Poet, I had to read three times before I got it. Brain on Slow tonite.
    :picture:
     
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