Black Poetry : HELL: A HALLOWEEN POEM

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    IN HELL: A Halloween poem
    By Andre Austin

    Heated soul in cracking Flames
    Who gave up my precious name
    Given to hell halls of slime and shame
    I’m now caught up in the evil game

    Snitched out by an Angel’s Dove
    Full name popped out in the Book of Dead
    Who wrote the Book of Love
    Give me that book of life instead

    I wasn’t chosen,
    Handed no keys just horn tipped nails
    I didn’t get ready like a diligent Bride
    No Holy Blood, or NO Holy Grail
    My odyssey just had too much pride

    Now I’m naked in chains
    In the dungeons of Hell
    All sin no gains
    Neither dead or alive just under a spell
    I’m in hell under so much pain.

    Locked away good never ever to be seen
    Good evening Snakes and happy Halloween
     
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    Whoaaa...this is so deep, this is so true an excellent lay-out brother, and the sad part is how can a parent feed the madness of dressing us to fit their (europeans) wishes? Yes, we are surely victims!!!

    This made me laugh :lol: ...but I need to say, you left out a very important word :slizzerling!!! This is indeed the entire/correct name :Slizzering Poison- (us): Snake!! :lol:
     
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    snake scott!!!!
    lol....nice prose bro...

    one love
    khasm
     
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    man dat was some ish right there...........tales of halloween
     
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    spooky time ..............
     
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    Good evening Snakes and happy Halloween

    it's about that time again... :SuN030:
     
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    yeah it is and i can't wait to bring back some spook fun !!! and scary feelings
     
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    back up for another year of fear
     
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