Black Poetry : Held Down !!

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    da big hold back
    what ya gonna do
    when things ain't right
    how u step up to da fight
    did what u did
    thinking it's right
    as **** dem from ya sight

    big hold up
    as stuff build up
    yet ya cup is empty

    u face da reality of stress
    with little caress
    all jacked up in a mess
    but u know ya doing da best
    now i confess
    i sho nuff stressed

    trying to weave from dis web
    a hit here
    a hit their
    banggin & banggin !
    da wrong people
    comes from everywhere:maddd:

    why me Lord of mercy
    what can i do
    did it all but turn da color blue
    no help !
    no fun
    should i run
    down in the mist of this crazyness
    da madness that hold me tyght
    keepin me from flyte :(

    I tryed dis and done dat
    starting to believe it's wack
    so i smack myself
    half sleep praying to he
    4 my soul to keep
    what's left to do
    i've turn da stones
    moved da rocks
    still i am blocked
    just held down so i ware a frown :(
    what more do i do
    to please u and u :confused:
     
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    certainly when we reach out

    he hears

    poeticd :0)

    pd
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    THANKS LADIES OF HEART
    BUT YA RICH ONE DONE HIT A WALL
    THEY CALL BREAKDOWN !!!

    YET I KEEP CHIPPING AWAY
    I SEE A HOLE YET NOT BIG ENOUGH
    SO I WORK THROUGHOUT DA NIGHT
    WILL I EVER TAKE FLYTE AGAIN!!???
     
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    4 sho' you'll take flyte again :toast:

    they can't hold you down peep..

    nfinite...
     
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    I believe you can fly...you will fly again. Nice reflective flow Rich.
     
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    $$rich-ne$$.


    ...your dayz in flight are not over, my dear! :)

    stay strong... & i know it's cliche'... but! you
    know it's hard to keep a good man down!! :wink:

    thank you for sharing.

    itsallLove, chile.

    elayne.
     
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    $R,

    Dawg, your flyte flies even through turbulence...

    Eventually, skies clear...

    Fly high bro!!!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    j'h ......Joyce ..........sunshyne .........GQ................

    my flyte is on da uplift again watch me up high soon
    i'll be roaming da room wit a 747 jeter
    Thanks poet's 4 da love given within ......
     
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    gotta hold on to what ya got
    and keep stride for what u need
    da faith is within me .......i'll fly again
     
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    but still i'm stuck on ground level
     
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