Black Poetry : HEAVY

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  1. guttapoetfromny

    guttapoetfromny Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I just need to close my eyes
    and focus on the back of my eyelids,
    find a place where i can breath deeply,
    and just think.
    My soul feels heavy,
    and my eyes cannot stay dry,
    I am drownding in my own sadness...
    wishing i could just get over myself,
    but life sometimes seems a little tough.
    My dad constantly tells me
    not to beat myself up,
    but i cant help but to think
    that im not trying hard enough.
    What i want in life
    isn't coming fast enough.
    So here i sit trying to figure it out,
    crying and talking to the lord...
    what's my life about?
    All i want is to be free,
    lay in the sun,
    and let my hair blow in the breeze,
    but right now that seems impossible
    with all of these rainy days,
    All i want is to be free,
    write and live off of the land,
    but that doesnt seem possible from where i stand.
    but lord please hold my hand
    and guide me!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    love this and surely he will
     
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    Asomfwaa Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Great Flow!
     
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