Black Poetry : Heavenly Acoustic

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Blkthunder, Dec 17, 2002.

  1. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    We resonate to the heavens tune
    And together our flowers shall bloom
    As we are played by his hand
    I see now I'm to understand
    My greater aim and purpose to 'Be'
    And to be his art for all to see
    Does the candle fear the coming of dawn?
    Does the coconut fear leaving the tree palm
    It is me whether above or below
    I am the storm cloud though in the river I flow
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Like Your Style Bro...

    Nice flow!

    :peace:
    GQ
     
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    RE: HI <------

    good-evening Blkthunder,

    thanks for taking the time to post this poem...

    Note: by the "TITLE", i first believe this was going to be a spiritual piece... :)


    Note Again: short but i also like your FLOW!! smooth ride, as you came off as a rapper that happen to luv this art form we call poetry...


    have a bless night...

    sincerely,
    c.t.adams-///
     
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    i'm with GQ...

    nice peace..
    jh.
     
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    I ain't no rapper
    but I do like to rhyme
    and this was a spiritual piece
    flowin from my 1st mind

    I guess your 2nd mind made a mistake
    but me being a rapper is pretty jake

    because I don't want this message to be a waste
    read it again, but not in haste

    critique and teach me my elder brother
    retool this wanna be messenger into a real other
     
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    tight flow....like how you brought this.
     
  7. Blkthunder

    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thankx bishop
     
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    Twofish Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wow blkthunder this is great right here!

    1:heart:
    2fish
     
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    that was really good. you truly do have a nice flow.....like it's just so easy, so simple, so smooth. intriguing. you know what i mean? in other words i liked it. keep it coming brotha.

    Kimdricka A.K.A Kim
     
  10. msluciousb

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    This was an absolutely beautiful epiphany!

    So very sweet and unassuming very fresh and oh so beautiful...like a priceless picture you painted these words.
    And aren't we all his works of Art ? It is in the knowing...we find the growing!

    Blessings On Ya House!
     
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