Quiet Poetry Lounge : Heaven

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Caesarlee31, Sep 1, 2004.

  1. Caesarlee31

    Caesarlee31 Active Member MEMBER

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    Heaven, you must wonder
    why stars shine brightly
    why you are the way you are
    and why that is so important to me.
    how salvation so vigorously sought after
    how your laughter
    no matter how child like
    keeps child like prayers answered.

    Heaven, last night I fell for an angel
    and we, made love.
    beautiful enough to make a beginning?
    I wonder, why did I cry, when a man isn’t
    supposed to.
    I wanted her to want to hear
    the beauty of my love song.
    often imitated but mostly missed.

    Heaven, I don’t know why,
    but last night in that room,
    I called your name while screaming out hers.
    over and over until our words gave birth to them selves
    and took on words of their own.
    I made a marriage last night,
    with a promise to return love
    the way that I met love
    to cry in the presents of sighs
    that tremble like thighs
    to birth words that brings
    tears to Eve’s eyes
    meaning I am music
    the song of Adam.
    Heaven, please hear me.
     
  2. DA BROTHER LOVE

    DA BROTHER LOVE Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    amen to that. i feel where you coming from.... i really feel that when people have orgasm's its like seeing a glimpse of heaven
     
  3. sevens_love

    sevens_love Active Member MEMBER

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    Hmmmmmmmmm so that's what it's like for a man...lol

    This is lovely
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This was a lovely scribe for a love of heart. Quite touching.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    beautifully expressed i hear ya on dis here !
    say it all let it flow i'm listening at ya ........
     
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