Quiet Poetry Lounge : Heaven

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Dior Robynsonne, Apr 14, 2004.

  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    The rain falls
    and I capture the way
    I feel for you
    in one word...

    HEAVEN.

    Giving me feelings of
    sunny days
    and sea breezes that
    leaves me feeling
    smooth and easy.
    I tease
    and you're quick to please.
    When the sunlight is ushered in
    and I take a glance at
    your cocoa brown skin,
    the way I feel is to one word a kin...

    HEAVEN.

    On a cloudy night,
    my calm sea and midnight breeze;
    my creamy and polished moonlight.
    You give me insight and for that
    loving you leaves me feeling
    tight and so right.
    A new life of love has come through
    I find myself quick to misconstrue,
    and my wind of feelings blow me
    in ways you can't imagine.
    Having you makes me complete,
    you are my number seven...
    and in my prayer I utter the one word that
    describes you and what you do to me...

    HEAVEN!

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth Wynne" Publishing
    ~Dior X. Robynsonne
    *from my soon-to-be published book,
    "Wynne of the Earth"
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    very nice
    loves the vibe
    flow on
    Peace
    Angel
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    heavenly loved this was beautiful
    flow on
     
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    That's what it's all about...HEAVEN on earth.
     
  5. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you all for your love. God bless you all!!!!!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    likewise unto u
     
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    That was really nice.I liked the way you compared that feeling to Heaven so sweet...
     
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    Beautiful and peaceful , this heaven.
     
  9. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you love. I appreciate you greatly
     
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