Black Poetry : Heaven

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  1. Afridancr

    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Heaven is...
    the blue skies
    that greet me after
    a nights sleep

    It's the deep brown
    eyes that...
    gaze into mine and
    reads what my mental
    in thinking

    Heaven is hearing
    your sexy voice in
    midday

    ~or~

    burnt toastN'eggs
    prepped for breakfast
    yesterday

    It is past pains
    and future pleasures

    Spiritual love a
    lifelong treasure

    If ever you doubt my
    feelings for you

    Reflect on these words...
    My heaven is

    YOU.

    (c)2000EssenceofAminata
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    FOREVER FEELIN' YA FROM ABOVE
     
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    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    QUEEN AFRI....

    ...if he didn't know!!... now he know!! :)

    i love you "Heaven"... keepdoinyourthangsis!

    NothinButLove...
    SunShyne~
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Rich and Sunshyne

    Thanks for feeling this piece! This is actually the only piece that I've written that isn't a personal life experience. Just 'felt' this and began to write.:) When God blesses me with a man I'd want him to know that next to GOD, he means everything to me...he'd be my heaven here on earth!
     
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    Afri,

    Heaven is most def you as well! I likes this piece!!!

    :heart:
    GQ
     
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    Afridancr Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Takin in all the love you got 4me!!!!;)

    Sunshyne...just waiting patiently to be blessed with my 'heaven':)

    $$Rich$$...hoping you continue to feel me from above!!!:)
     
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    ***entering form the garden or serentiy***

    afri,

    when you start to write of a love that you have yet to experience then you are walking in the gift of GOD's prepartion. The more you write of it, the more you are being readied...

    Praise God for your first step into your destiny...

    write what HE gives you and He will give you what you write...

    ***returning to the garden***
     
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    Heaven is like
    you
    realizing the beauty
    of you
    in you
    which is God

    through the reflection of another...
    and that's beautiful...

    flow on sis...flow on.
     
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