Black Haiku : heaven vs hell

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    Striving for heaven
    From inside a place called hell
    A constant struggle
     
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    feeling you here no doubt

    i've always said i'm in a room called heaven in a hotel called hell

    wanted to write a poet about

    but................................................
     
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    hell consume me here
    on earth as heaven awaits
    me from this struggle
     
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    Fight to strive
    Battle the stuggle
    Angels, They'll Sing
     
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    My worse mistake set
    on repeat, waiting for God's
    finger to hit skip
     
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