Black Poetry : heaven scorned a virgin

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  1. NileReflection

    NileReflection Active Member MEMBER

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    Heaven Scorned a Virgin
    made her a whore to reality
    left her empty on the desolate streets of insanity
    and left her to bleed her maiden blood upon the snow
    Heaven left her naked upon the cold of humanity
    and made her walk blindly through the darkness of men's hearts.

    Heaven disarded an innocent child into a den of lions
    and when she screamed, heaven answered in silence.
    Heaven left her at the mercy of vultures
    Under the fiery eye of the sun, she is left to die
    destructed
    a lost child behind a woman
    helpless
    Funny how heaven forgot to cry.

    Dedicated to my sister.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    wow!!!
    dis was deep and awesomely felt within
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yes this was deep...
    felt this flow indeed....
    flow on
     
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    WOW :jawdrop: what a deeply felt dedication
     
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    I'm at a loss for words
    this piece ripped through me

    ...emotions left stirring
     
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    UMMMMMM....

    I DON'T KNOW WHAT TO SAY...
    I...I'M JUST SPEECHLESS
    AND I THINK THAT THIS IS A MASTERPIECE
    MAYBE MORE SO BECAUSE
    PERSONALLY THIS ONE TOUCHES ME
    U JUST UNLOCKED MY WRITERS BLOCK ON A SONG I'M WORKING ON...I THANK YOU FOR YOUR GIFT..
    U R THE BOMB TRULY..THANK YOU AGAIN...29
     
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