Quiet Poetry Lounge : HEAVEN n' HOLE

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Wher will you go,will you rise
    will you go high upon da skies
    will it be deep down low
    in a place they call da hole

    Is it really a heaven for me
    a new world call eternally
    or will i have a seat too dwell
    in this hole namely hell

    Why would i go there
    when i'm already here
    in a universe of earthly fear
    who will judge my fate n' steer

    Is there a heaven n' hole
    or just a tale a story told
    when time come to be dat immortal shell
    where do da soul go, who really knows

    Is there a light or a plag of darkness
    questions unknown to lead my happiness
    tell me where the spirit reside
    wherewill it live once we died
     
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    Your 'heaven is totally up to you...you can make it, or hell. As far as your spirit ...it never dies.
    Great piece poet!!!
     
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    Yep, sometimes it seems like things of the earth is hell but essentially as Queentswana put it it's up you in the long run..:) Good poem Rich!
     
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    Thank you both ......Inside my heaven is where i wanna be and where my soul will
    find eternal light
     
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    sometimes this place we leave seems as it is hell...but life is jus as we make it...i believe i have a mansion in heaven as promised to me with my Father My God
     
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    I too believe this and it's my hope i reach this place of foreverness
     
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