Black Poetry : heaven came down

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  1. keri

    keri Active Member MEMBER

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    heaven came down and glory filled my soul
    but i should have known that a price of blood
    would have to be paid for the reformations changed
    because we weren't to be
    be careful what you ask for, what you pray for...what you wish for
    (somebody told me)
    did i change somebody's destiny because i couldn't bear for you to be a way from me~ greedily i had to have you~ and heaven came down and glory filled my soul but i should have known a price of blood would have had to be paid for the mistakes i made
     
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    Alright now - good flow Keri!!!

    Peace
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    Good to see your flow again Keri...
     
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    hi keri

    this was very thoughtful


    pd
     
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    Wow....

    This poem spoke volumes of my life. And it scared the **** out of me... :x: But i like it... this was nice... go and get your flow on girl... cause i liked this one... Now you really got me thinking about some stuff...
     
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    :wave: Haaaaaaaaaay Keri :wave:

    long time Sis ... Welcome Back!!!

    so good to read you again

    :heart:

    Destee
     
  7. keri

    keri Active Member MEMBER

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    thank you everyone for the replies, i had not been writing as much as i used to and then i finally went to afronet to check my messages and got my birthday wishes thank you for that!
    K......will have to set up camp
     
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    Miss Keri

    first of all....so good to have you with us sis!

    secondly...you present much to think about in this powerful piece.

    keep it flowing!

    a
     
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    keri

    i know all to well
    about being careful
    about what you pray for

    nice piece

    DSSNY
     
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    A deep piece Keri

    A meaningful piece..the price we pay for love!
     
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