Quiet Poetry Lounge : Heaven and Earth

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by Eisha, Jun 16, 2004.

  1. Eisha

    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love by nature, in your heavenly form,
    Making sweet romance; causing thunderstorms.

    Resting your head on their shoulder showing support and love,
    Intertwining like two turtledoves.

    Togetherness and support, considered also earthly values,
    Deep and pure as the moisture of the morning dew.

    Combine heaven and earth to create a endless tragedy,
    Two lovers can finally come together to end an eternal parody.
     
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    When two people come together as I :sand: they can stop or start most anything. wonderful poem, much luv.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    this was very well done indeed as two become one they can master any destiny
    hope u had a sweet birthday sistah
     
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    That's peace Eisha. Beautiful :spinn:
     
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    Yes, what the power of two can do, this was lovely Eisha.
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Thank you for all the love everyone :heart:
     
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    I'm new to the board and see that the minds of the young are creating like they've lived a thousand years. I loved this piece and felt surrounded in its warmth.
    ONE LOVE
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Thank you, mikey for showing alot of love and welcome to the forum. :heart:
     
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    aaawe, this was so sweet...
    nice work Eisha! :toast:
     
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    Eisha Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :heart: Thank you, angelicsage for all the love. :heart:
     
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