Black Poetry : Heatwave

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Erotic vibes shakes
    my body trimble
    she sway in motion

    my heart beats faster
    as she temps my lust
    her eyez glaze deep
    into mines
    da heat wave set a blaze
    da fire burns
    as i yearn for this moment

    slowly i turn
    but her passion
    continue a becon
    calling me
    i watch from the
    corner of my eyez
    coz her beauty
    was far to wild

    she stole my heart
    and took grasp of dis soul
    i now have a story untold
    now i close my eyez
    set my pen down
    da rapture of desires
    captured within
    i reach out but
    she was gone !!

    have u seen her ????
     
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    Blkthunder Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    She was here last night and did the same thing to me.......
    "now I close my eyez
    set my pen down
    da rapture of desires
    captured within "
    I like that part..introspective
    flow with it
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Blkthunder she pass yo way too......!
    now i wonder where she is
    as my mind play tricks on me
    my desire for her passion
    set a blaze that send me
    into a rapture of erotic mass
    my pen scribe da beauty
    yet i can't tell da story
    so again i close my eyez
    fall into da spell
    and cast away......THANKZ bruh!
     
  4. UL820

    UL820 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$, when I seen her, she was headed WEST
    said something but San Diego and a sailors prayer
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    UL820 u saw dat gal too
    she walked pass me
    without a word
    her beauty told it all
    set sail to da west

    I need Bishop to cut da search lights on !
    she gotta be somewhere out their
    man !!! where can she be ................ ????
     
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    UbZoRbShUn Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ooooooohhhhh she doing

    drive by's eh???





    One
     
  7. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    zorbbie she doing something !
    she pop pass me but left a mystery upon me
    u seen her????
     
  8. Mind~$oul

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    liked this alot i'm lovig ya style rich

    one luv
     
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    Thanks Mind~$oul just been locked into
    da depth of her ......but she's gone !

    have u seen her ????
     
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    I see her. Been watching her every movement. True she is on the West coast, but she's headed towards the pacific. Looks like she's going global, you better gas up the 747, you got some flying to do.
     
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