Black Poetry : "Heated" Discussion

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by serenti-poet, Jun 10, 2003.

  1. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your key my ignition, your proposal my permission.
    Wet lips, poisoned tongue, small price to pay for fun.
    Roaming fingers, pacing feet, tangled hair from the heat.
    Juices flowin down my thighs, moans escape confused with cries.
    Lick my finger taste my taste mission unknown/ Not in our case.
    Hard, long, steaming wet, don't confuse our LOVE wit sex.
    Brown warm fingers find there way, soon after the kissing you start to play.
    On the bed is too normal, kitchens been done, find a place and give me some.
    Venerable eyes, tell you I"m yours, ur a criminal and I have unlocked doors.
    Lift me up and take me high, position your luv between my thighs.
    Deceiving tears tell deceiving lies, don’t read the tears read my eyes.
    Bow down at my temple, but don’t eat all my pie,
    Taste my juices and hear my cries.
    Let go of it all put it all in me, with clear vision we both can see.
    Pleasurable pain, depressed smile, been wanting you for a quite a while.
    Collapse on my chest but rest in me, in me
    In darken rooms it’s you I see.
    :love:
     
  2. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot, hot... hot!... the picture you painted... hmmm, hmm, hmmm... very tyte and exotic flow :)... i like... i like... I LIKE!...


    peace
     
  3. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice flow serenti-poet
     
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    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks that was what I was going for glad you liked it :) hope to hear some more poetry from you soon until then peace
     
  5. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for feelin it justbnme lol
     
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    poeticlyspeakin Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Home is where the heart is, but my heart isn't her
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    oh thats so tight!!! I wonder what ur students would think of this one?? lol jk. g'job poet, i told u i love all ur work.
     
  7. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i'm lovin' this one! its so tyte! the flow, the imagination, everything!
     
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    wow!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!Serenti I love the the scen that you're drawing Great srcibe!
     
  9. Mustapha

    Mustapha New Member MEMBER

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    Serenti this is a lovely peom which I felt that it definately came from the heart. Thank you for sharing that with us.
     
  10. serenti-poet

    serenti-poet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    poet----thanks gurl you make me smile time and time and time again and for that if anything I love all of your work also

    lovely---thanks girl for feelin my vibe it's very nice of you to check me out

    Swt T---thanks girl glad you liked it but of course I like all of your stuff too

    Mustapha---thank you my brutha for feelin my vibe that I droppped right here and WELCOME TO THA FAMILY MAN!! :) and your very much welcome hope to read some work from you soon

    and to all of ya'll thanks for taking the time to read my work :kiss:
     
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