Black Poetry : Heated Argument

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by lpoet, Oct 20, 2002.

  1. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    How you gonna stand there and tell me
    Who I am
    And what the hell I can and can't be
    Through my pen a long time ago I realized
    I could accomplish anything and cant no
    Man women or child belittle me cause Ima always
    Know who I am and that’s LP and
    F*** a God
    Hail Me!
    Cause everything I've become I've had to struggle
    And strive to be and so many of my ****** have died
    Forcing me to warm my belly with liquor and color
    My eyes with weed
    Indeed I am a product of the system been
    Shackled and chained for loosing at a game at which
    I never knew the rules, and you fools think you gonna
    Out smart the cops running around
    With your pistols, knives And what not
    Little girls having babies at 13
    F*** a wet dream when a young *****
    Can come up with a scheme
    To make him and all his ****** rich quick
    F*** a job I'ma run my hand over
    This paper and try to make that first hit
    While momma out on the street
    Selling here beautiful body
    Trying to get that quick fix
    Old men standing on the corner
    Drinking liquor at 9 in the morning
    Playing the lotto trying to hit tomorrows lucky 3 picks
    Lookig out the window on this Sunday afternoon
    I realized you right!
    I aint **** and I need to fix it soon

    Could God be the answer?

    To Be Continued…………
     
  2. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hey this was heavy and deep poet!


    i,m waithing for the next part

    but this peace already got my attention.

    i believe he,s the answer to all,but of course that is my believe
     
  3. LibertyLady

    LibertyLady Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i,m sorry i ment piece......

    oh and i forgot ya aint **** "**** is ****"'
    and a human is human
    Powerrrrrrrrr!
     
  4. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks so much for the reply libertylaida
     
  5. shaz

    shaz Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    This sounds like one of the twisted questions that keep ya wake at night
    wish i had some real answears
    God bless
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    truely without da power of GOD nothing can be .....
    dis was a real twisted heated vibe
     
  7. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks rich for the reply
     
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    lp.


    well ****, poet!!

    1st... i gotta tell you i was OverJoyed to see your name
    once again among the "thread starters"!! :D in otha words
    ...it's about **** time you posted sumthin'!!
    next... this one 'caused me to feel sooo many different
    things! thank you for openin' me up this morning!

    itsallLove, chile. (u betta believe it!) :)

    elayne.
     
  9. lpoet

    lpoet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ahhhhhhhhh thanks elayne
     
  10. Da Street So'ja

    Da Street So'ja Banned MEMBER

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    just stay positive and don't fall victim to da streets

    cause this piece is str8 street
    and i know streets


    DSS
     
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