Black Poetry : HEAT

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by caramelpython, Nov 9, 2003.

  1. caramelpython

    caramelpython Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    HEAT

    Heat,Fire
    The warmth of my desire.
    Burn Baby Burn and feel me grow higher.


    Am I too hot to the touch?
    Or is it that you want me too much?

    Do you want to douse my flame with your moist wet box?

    Or are you affraid that the flame might get you too hot?

    "Well Burn Baby Burn and Feel My Heat"

    I am worse than that summer, that melted your cream!

    Had it running all down you`r leg`s, From that spot in-between!

    Your thighs and yout eyes
    Can no longer hide lies.

    Ones wet while the other is rolled back waiting to allow your lips to release "CRIES"

    Yet my heat still shall rise
    Aginst the small of your back.

    Playing morris code with your spine...

    TAP
    TAP
    TAP

    Every throb has a degree and my heat is pounding.

    "NEWS FLASH"!

    This up coming heat wave will be astounding!!!

    ~ SO BURN BABY BURN AND FEEL MY HEAT ~

    As I give your body motions with lotions That get hot when you blow.

    Yet sends A chill down your spine When I travel down below.

    Your Equator to Grenada and swim your cannal.

    Mr toung twister up in this piece now!


    My lips and tongue work as a team navagating that fat little man in the boat.
    While your lips wisper commands....

    STROKE
    STROKE
    STROKE

    ~ Well Burn Baby Burn And Feel My Heat ~

    I clench your thighs as you arch in suprise

    You clench the sheets as I contue to eat.

    "ICE CREAM"
    "ICE CREAM"

    "DING"
    "DING"

    Your coming!

    As I vibrate your candy, That's right I`m Humming!

    Just another level of heat that few have achieved

    OH DAM

    Wait Baby...... Calm Down

    "BREATH"
    "BREATH"
    "BREATH"

    ~YES BURN BABY BURN FEEL MY HEAT!!! ~

    ~Copyright 2002 by Caramelpython~
     
  2. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :hot:
    fanning myself....nice
    workin dat pen..... :wave:
     
  3. shUt-Yo-M0uf

    shUt-Yo-M0uf Active Member MEMBER

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    wow....i felt the heat over here....almost had me burnin burnin burnin...keep doin wha cha do baby!
     
  4. SwtT

    SwtT Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwww
     
  5. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    dis was hot ........somebody get some water
    tyte scribe of deep heat
     
  6. arthur1210

    arthur1210 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    hot, definetly...lots of passion here
    thanks for sharing
     
  7. Heartfelt

    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    caramelpython, this piece is off the chain. Man, this is too raw anf I'm loving it. VERY VERY NICE.
     
  8. Heartfelt

    Heartfelt Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I meant "and".
     
  9. Hiclass_female

    Hiclass_female Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :flamet: Your work is always on fire!!!!! :wink: Loving it!!!
     
  10. Khasm13

    Khasm13 STAFF STAFF

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    :lol: always gotta breathe...
    no need to hyperventalate...
    tyte
    peace
    khasm
     
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