Black Poetry : Heat Rises

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  1. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Heat Rises
    Heading high
    From the tip of my toes
    To the top of my head
    When you are near all I can think is......
    Heat rises
    My cheeks get ta rising
    Rosy wit color
    When you speak of how much you need me all I can think is.....
    Heat rises
    You and I
    Two hot lovers
    Float high
    Our passion is the proof
    When I think of the love we have all that comes to mind is.....
    Heat rises
    We have no where else to go but up....
    Heat rises
    We are headed to the top then beyond.....
    Heat rises
    Heat rises
    We rise because our love is hot and....
    Heat rises
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    sweet release this was awesome
     
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    re: Heat

    Now you know this is hot. Great Job.
     
  4. SoothinDivinity

    SoothinDivinity Active Member MEMBER

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    Thanks Rich and Poetrymama. The love means alot to me. :)
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very passionate and creative piece. I enjoyed this, flow on.
     
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    Correctly so...heat does rise
    It's a wonderful thing to know that you're ...riding on top of the fire.
     
  7. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heat rises and whewww everything becomes a blur lol
     
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