Quiet Poetry Lounge : HeartSong

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by DaFlavaFul, Sep 8, 2002.

  1. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I am ready for love
    love are you ready for me?
    Emotion runs highs
    as i long to see
    if there is a possibility
    there is a right one for me.

    The world goes by
    and the candles burns low
    as form my impoverish soul these words flow
    and as my pen eats the paper
    the night wears on
    my heart continues it lonely song.

    The light of love has never touched me
    and many a time hope has left me
    and fleeting thoughts
    has grasp my mind
    in hopes, seeking to find
    a remnant of love left behind.
     
  2. herlove

    herlove Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    umh, i thought i was the only one ... i feel ya
     
  3. DIIMOND

    DIIMOND Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    I can relate.....defintely feel ya
    wonderful expressions and well wrote!!!!
     
  4. LiLi

    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    my travels have taken me
    far and wide
    down school bus isles
    to flights in the sky
    and with every glance
    i hope to seek
    that true one for me
    imagine that first-sight vibe
    i've read of in prose
    and been told of by bards
    and dreamed of...
    with each passing day
    that one simple spark...

    imagine...there are so many of us who say "thought i was the only one..." when reading what you just shared...it's funny to think that if that is true...that perhaps in our hope and longing we've donned a pair of blinders during our search...we seem to walk as if ghost on this earth overly focused in search of that one sweet destiny...sorta like can't see the forest for the trees...
     
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    LiLi Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    oh lord...by the way...i really loved it!
     
  6. DaFlavaFul

    DaFlavaFul Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thanx for catching my flow! Lili, its weighs real heavy sometimes doesnt it!
     
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    feelin' that

    it was nice to come on here for the first time in a long long long time and read something that expressed how I really feel now...I really liked that