Black Poetry : Hearts Still Reign

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  1. 1poetsought

    1poetsought Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    You act like you care
    I fear...
    I'm out of air ~
    Remember we said
    We won't go there?

    Both too far apart
    Each,
    Excepting change
    The emptiness there
    Drawing us so near

    A love gone awry
    Cries of joy subside
    Ignoring your pride
    In a house divided

    Hearts go afoul
    Friendship,
    Runs aground
    Real love rebounds
    There's hope around

    A prodigal son
    Is no one to blame
    There's no Jezebel
    Dear hearts still reign


    Darryl Abdu Omari :luvv:
    aka 1poetsought copyright 2004
     
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    I saw my reflection
    in these waters...
    feeling your flow..
     
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    very nice!!!
     
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    I felt the heaviness of those hearts in this piece, bittersweet flow.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feeling ya on this here tyte drop
     
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    ok now you layin it down
    i am feelin ya onthis
    Peace
     
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    crystal clear and beautiful, my brother
     
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    Hearts still reign!
     
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