Black Poetry : Hearts of Luv (Secret Admirer) $$RICH$$ & 4EVERLUV Collabo

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    $$RICH$$

    My heart lone as it luv
    a admirer came from above
    her eyez are radiant brown
    she came unto me in sensual sound
    her body drap in beauty

    Express the thoughts i now feel
    from an admire she now reveal
    not by mere words they are seal
    but the inner beings her heart now live
    into a beginning of luv

    Now thy hearts of mend
    to a new found friends
    sharing secrets into our morrow
    a passionate luv we now hug
    she my daydream and night sleep
    a heart of luv and someone sweet

    4EVERLUV
    not looking just hanging out
    caught my attention
    made me stand about
    face could not believe
    the magnitude of his embrace

    of me

    tried to resist the power he inflicts
    through his rhymes
    they kept pulling at me
    calln’ me near although I had some fears
    wanted to steer clear
    I couldn’t

    So I stretched out my hand
    and he took it
    Now we can’t let go just want
    Talk and flo all day and night
    No sense in fighn’ it
    feels so right

    $$RICH$$
    It was like something new
    between us two
    sending waves and body craves
    from da luv of mentals made
    i only can confess

    From the sway and the sexy dress
    from them hips to her hips
    got me into some flippin dip
    i knew at first sight
    she was my shinning light

    Friendship is what i take
    i knew it would come a day
    but true love my heart will make
    for the sensul 12 play
    and in da moaning of rubs she awake
    through da steamy erotic lay
    that pull and pull tenderly so gentle
    now she all in my mental.


    4EVERLUV
    I’ve never met anyone
    With a heart so full of
    Luv and compassion
    That fits every fashion
    He doesn’t care who you be
    He just gives it so unselfishly
    I was amazed just to see


    But then I felt it
    Hovering over me
    Mind and body
    Oh, did I tell ya he
    makes me weak when he speaks
    and I can’t bring myself to stay away
    thoughts of him fill mind thru out my day
    and ooooh, when we lay
    let me stop…..
    Cuz I was about to let it all out

    He is the keeper of my dreams
    The reason my heart and soul sings
    He keeps these dimples protruding out
    Comfort me when I'm in doubt
    So blessed he came about


    $$RICH$$
    She like day breaking news
    with a love so true
    warm deep and devine
    i see why the sun really shine
    and to label her mines

    Going through such faze
    that set of an extreme blaze
    i never knew it would be true
    until my heart met u
    in the mist of a gallopin breeze

    A profolio of a Goddess
    sending my body to uplifting spirits
    she was da admirer of charm
    and the sweetie in my arms
    from the day she arrive to my surprise

    4EVERLUV
    Now let me tell you why
    My heart forever sighs
    From my poetic prize

    Not ordinary he’s extrodinary
    Tender gentle and kind
    likes to think he’s shy
    But that’ something I won’t buy

    He’s my sweet passionate treat
    That knocks me off me feet
    True gentleman he pulls out the seat
    Definitely knows how to treat
    his queen


    $$RICH$$

    Forth thy queen of love
    i am the hand above
    my soul touch & hug
    to her existance we rub
    Thy KANG in a:new: beginnig
    :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart: :heart:
     
  2. watzinaname

    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Such a beautiful and endearing collaboration, full of love from the heart of hearts. Flow on poets.
     
  3. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Big Thankz watz coming from you from us both on the love
    it was one we tryed in the mist of a moment ...................
     
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    nevar Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i agree with watz flo on poets
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thankz Nevar for the love and visit from us both
    one of them releases from the hip ya know ........
     
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    Nevar:
    Thank you for the luv.

    Watz:
    You know I luv when you come check me out.:) As $$RICH$ said it means alot coming from you. Thank you so much.

    Much Luv to you both
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u 4EVERLUV for the lovely time we shared making this piece
    I love every moment you are very gifted .
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    $$RICH$$
    aaahhhh, Your so very welcome and too sweet for
    those beautiful words. I too enjoyed every moment
    and look forword to the next.
    Much luv to you my sweet.:kiss:
     
  9. queentswana

    queentswana Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Piece well done...I enjoyed the collab with you both...^5
     
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    queen:
    The luv is much appreciated from us both. We just tryn' to feel the Collab Flo like you and Kieta. Thanks for the visit.
     
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