Black Poetry : Heart's Duplicity

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  1. Randee

    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    the contradictory doubleness of my heart, mouth and hands
    deceptive words and actions i can not withstand
    its the duplicity of my heart
    thats tearing me apart
    never have i loved two before
    and love, yes, I said it and i do
    like a parent who loves two children equally
    yet for different reasons. Hypocritically,
    i beg them to love only me and
    without warnings I issue decrees
    advancing the duplicity
    with the multiplicity
    of having two men say they love you
    and in the same night attempt to persue
    and i know in the long run i will lose
    my heart eventually a detonating fuse
    weighing pros and cons I still can not choose
     
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    i like this flow...
    carry on:angel1:
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    flow head on poet of da week
    dis was awesome drop
    give me mo !!
     
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    i feel the heaviness
    that is covering you
    on this flow
    let it pour
    much love to you
    Peace
     
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    yeah gurl give yourself time...take a breather...then straighten up and see clear...it will all come to you...I know it will...and you will see what u need to do...whats best for you and them...because love is lovin them even if they are not with you.
     
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    Love will choose for you!

    Mama used to say keep a pair and a spare.
    I didn't really understand and never really went
    there...until
    I stumbled and to my surprise I was one of those
    women with two guys.
    Loving them both equally?( now knowing), I doubt
    that I did. But the bliss of ignorance had the
    saddest refrain I was playing a playas game.
    What is done in the dark will soon come to light.
    Love will choose...
    Or you will lie alone in the night!
    Blessings On Ya House!
    *Else play on playa... :wink:
     
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    I'm inclined to agree with Triniti and Msluscious...

    Have been down this road...it's dismal and sad
    heartbreaking...especially if one doesn't know about
    the other...but I also know how difficult it is to let go
    ...but one will have to take the lonely road
    or you will end up all alone.....Never intended to
    end up with two...but a bird in the hand, you know
    the saying...
    a clear conscious makes for a soft pillow at night...
    I found that out the heartbroken way...
    much love to you girl...I hope everything works out
     
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    Randee Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    you last two are always right, but its easier said then done. I know which one I should be with, the one who loves me for me and not what I have and can do for him. The one who does my dishes while I sleep off a headache from partying with the other. Crazy *** that I am.
     
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    double da pleasure
    double da touble...
    this was on point...poet of da week :)
    peace
    khasm
     
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