Black Poetry : Hearts Deception

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  1. MzBlkAngel

    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    My soul creeps as my spirit grasp
    for each breath as if its my last
    Intertwining in its on misery
    trying not to relive each moment we spent
    Wondering if its true.
    For my soul is shattered…
    as time past me by
    I feel empty then the last hour…
    was my love that meaningless?
    In the heavens at night,
    my soul sings a lost melody
    that sways in the wind.
    What’s left of me….
    a heartache that cuts deep
    and bleeds of what is absent of me.
    Which is you, …
    tears run of red as my lungs
    cover with gray smoke
    to form a scar of everlasting torture
    of a lost love not knowing if it is lost…
    walls rebuilding and locks at every gate
    as I drown in my after thoughts
    of what you mean to me…
    and what I thought I meant to you...

    (C) 2005
    D.S Production
     
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    Excellent piece from a exceptional poet. Continue to bless us with your heart felt work poet. Thanks for sharing.
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    very nice done as it takes me poeticly on a ride
    deep and mild
     
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    Love goes, but real love comes back
    the heart bleeds, but the bleeding stops
    we sometimes, give in...but we never give up

    love is ...strange
     
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    This was a very heart felt piece. Always diggin your drops,
    Flow on poet
     
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    Feeling the emotion in this that cries, love hurts.
     
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    Awwww sister :( why you gotta go and make me feel all sad and stuff and stuff :(

    this one i felt SOUL deep *sigh*
     
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    Deep
    Love does cut deep sometimes
    I felt every line of this hearfelt drop
    Excellent piece of work
     
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