Black Poetry : Heart's Ache

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    I cried inside and then I died
    last night…reality hit
    How could we make this fit
    Two hearts into one

    A soul deep affair
    Placin me first
    Not the other woman
    ….in your life

    Wantin you for myself
    Thinkin you could be real
    …for me

    You got me reachin inside myself
    Searchin yearnin and wishin
    Then drownin in my heart tears
    Foldin in my fears
    Acting if I am strong
    Takin your lead….

    Your energy makes me feel
    Like a little girl back in da day
    Trying not to hope to much and wish
    From childhood to adulthood it should be you
    Realizing it could never be


    Now I am here dealin
    Wit the emptiness of
    …a thought givin by you
     
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    wow.......why do i feel this so deep , maybe because it's a page from my life
     
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    Happy you can relate to my poetry and do indeed understand it. Thanks for the read.
     
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