Black Poetry : Heartfelt

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  1. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    When
    I open my mouth
    harmonies and distinct
    melodies drip
    in the form of honey and
    lovely.
    I sigh
    in perfection
    and
    create my own illusion
    of the perfect us.
    Your entrance
    into my spirit
    causes me confusion
    and I bow gracefully.
    There is no turning back
    and I refuse to let go
    what I experience today
    and what gives my skin
    a love-burnished glow.
    I move forward in
    complete
    ecxtasy,
    careful of nothing but
    always aware that
    loving you is the
    most elicit and important thing
    to me.

    Copyright 2004 Anno Domini/ "Earth's Wyne" Publishing
    ~*Capucine
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    drip like honey
    sweet and tasty
    tyte drop to melt an heart
    ya art is untouched
     
  3. Dior Robynsonne

    Dior Robynsonne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Thank you so much my man. Its always a pleasure to recieve love from you.
     
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    MzBlkAngel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    nice very nicenow you know i am feelin this vibe
    flow on....Angel
     
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    wow, this was so soft...
    but somewhat mystical
    although...more powerful
    than it appears...
    this is the kind of piece
    you have to take in slowly...
    and when it finally takes
    it's full affect...
    it leaves one awe struck...
     
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    Oozing thick, like honey, always there, despite it all. Well felt piece.
     
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