Black Poetry : Heartburn

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by phenomenalwoman, Jul 31, 2006.

  1. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Love
    Forgive me for questioning
    But sometimes it’s hard to see your value
    Let alone your worth
    Somehow your sly seductive nature
    Keeps me falling for the same ole tricks
    Same ole traps
    Jumping through the same ole hoops
    Crying the same ole tears
    Wasting oh so many years

    Love
    I know I haven’t been waiting on you
    So are you out there
    Somewhere…
    Waiting on me?
    Is there something out there
    So deep my eye can’t sustain it?
    There’s something
    Some reason
    I fall for you every time
    When will you fall for me
    Love
     
  2. Aaliyahmonet

    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :)

    :D This was very nice phenomenal:) Keep dem scribes coming, i'll be lookin out:)

    Much Love

    AM
     
  3. 4EVERLUV

    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    phenomenal:
    This write is just that
    "PHENOMENAL"
    How did you get inside my mind.
    Flo on poet....

    Much Luv
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    O' yes love awaits u babe
    it's near and clear do let it in when it knocks
     
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    Tha-Emissary Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yep I get that heartburn everytime I eat some chicken to fast! but yep there's something out for your just keep the faith baby and he'll come to you! This was as smooth as Mylanta!
     
  6. phenomenalwoman

    phenomenalwoman Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Aaliyahmonet- thanks for reading, it just came from where I am right now in my heart.

    4everluv- It's just that woman to woman connection I guess. I am just another female flowing about what is going on in her life. I am glad that you relate.

    Darling Rich-Thanks for that, I am constantly opening the door without listening for the knock. But right now I'm tired and all I have is time to wait...

    T-E - You got jokes, smooth like Mylanta huh? j/k I have nothing but faith so I've stopped looking. I've learned that the devil puts bad people in your way to keep your discouraged. But all that's good comes from God.

    Thank you all for commenting
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    So much can be dressed up to look like love, hard to tell the difference initially sometimes, with such convincing costumes and all. Many have been in this space, and you conveyed the feeling oh so well.