Black Poetry : HeartBroken No Mend (Missing You)

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  1. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Im crying tears like waterfalls
    My heart bleeds and my mind stalls/
    Its like what do I do beside shed my tears
    I have no where to turn but lay in my fears/
    Its a mere moment of spiritual guidance when I look to the Lord
    Life is worth living but I dont want to live anymore/
    Its silly to feel the way i do at this time in my life
    I should be happy spitting poetic to my wife/
    Not hold my head down thinking she wont come back
    I need you back more than I need a black/
    But I have started smoking again because of that
    I have leaned on my shoulders and thats a fact/
    When I look at your pictures my heart starts to ache
    This is true love a real battle my love isnt fake/
    Real talk-this is reality and im begging for you
    Hear my cries and prayers-baby im missing you/
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    surely she hear thy plea
     
  3. IfUComeSoftly

    IfUComeSoftly Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    heartfelt drop brotha tantrum...

    flow on poet


    softly
     
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    There's no way she can't hear your cries my brother.
     
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    Tantrum:
    I hope you let her read this.
    My heart feels for you and for her
    because I want yall to work it out.
    Don't give up brotha, surely she
    will hear your cry and come to dry
    your eyes. Beautifully Expressed!!!

    Much luv
     
  6. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    i hope she sees this
    and understands my love and feelings
    me and her is like man in mad love
    but things happen to comprise things
    life doesnt always happen the way things are planned i see
    but i love her for real
    uno
     
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    ibrahim Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hello Brother Tantrum. Long time no see.
    I see you came back with a big bang.
    Keep it flowing.
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Your words were heartfelt, certainly she can feel the warmth therein. Emotive piece here.
     
  9. Tantrum

    Tantrum Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you for the love poets i appreciate that maybe she will hear me
    uno
     
  10. nevar

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    what in the world my brotha could it be that you soften. me likes me likes. much love to ya ba!!!!1
     
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