Quiet Poetry Lounge : Heartbreak Rican

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by choclatangel, Aug 1, 2006.

  1. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Peaches n creamin Rican
    leaking the fluid that gives life
    Always heat seeking with your missile
    But the honey pot is now cold
    No longer your home
    Your games have grown so old
    That my tongue is now bold
    I put no thoughts on hold
    Rippin into your tissues
    Every single time I diss you
    Knowing what I know now
    I will never even miss you
    You couldn't be faithful
    Didn't know the word commitment
    And my monthly body cleansing is late so
    The seed that you so freely spilled at will
    Will bring something beautiful into this world
    A human being whose heart beats
    And has feelings, hopes, and dreams
    So before you tell me '"it's" not yours' again
    No more words from your sorry mouth
    Just get the hell out of my house!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    whoaaaa!!!! u told it str8 and kept it real
    word up !
     
  3. choclatangel

    choclatangel Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Yeah brother Rich, this was a hard one for me to write. I wanted to say so much more but couldn't find a 'nice' way to put it. But I had to lay down my feelings about this situation.
     
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    i felt power behind this piece well well written and raw truth sistah

    much much love sweettee29
     
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    4EVERLUV Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    choclatangel:
    Say it then sista choclateangel

    Much luv
     
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