Black Poetry : heartbeat

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by alyce, Apr 8, 2001.

  1. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    ...essential to the body in order for the circulatory system to complete its function ~

    ...a mystery, because
    there is an almost indiscernible moment,
    after conception,
    when the cells have clustered,
    forming the embryo;
    and it is the single-most important proof
    that life has begun...

    ...the barometer of every emotion felt
    ~from slow and steady when the body is at rest ~
    to rapid and palpitating during times of stress,
    excitement ~

    ~and incredible love

    heartbeat:

    ...as essential as air ...

    Alyce, 1999

    :heart:
     
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    GQ Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Oh Yeah!!!!

    Lay it down there Alyce!!!

    Smooth and essential flow!!!

    Peace
    GQ
     
  3. Jyntlbreez

    Jyntlbreez Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce Your beautiful flow leaves me speechless,
    actually with a lil feelin of tachypnea(SMILE)
    Enjoyed your scribe! Jyntl
     
  4. GA_Sunshyne

    GA_Sunshyne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    MS A....

    thank you...

    & that's all i have to say... :)

    NothinButLove...
    Sunshyne~
     
  5. Hunter

    Hunter Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    Only you could scribe it circulatory without hardly missing the BEAT ;)

    Yeah...when the heart beats...
    It beats for you

    *let-the-blood-flow*
     
  6. mojo

    mojo Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    alyce, someone before me said this

    you shole know how to get a message across!

    I love the way you manipulate the pen to do your will. Stroke my sistah!

    mojo
     
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    Reason Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alyce

    This has to be the tightest, sweetest joynt eva!

    Madd Respect
    Reas
     
  8. alyce

    alyce Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thank you all

    for feeling my rhythm on this...an old favorite from the archives...


    A :heart:
     
  9. Nita

    Nita Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    *checkin my pulse*
    Yeah I'm cool, :wink:
    Nice Al...
     
  10. saleem

    saleem Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Alycer

    thanks for reminding me.

    saleem
     
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