Black Poetry : heartache

Discussion in 'Black Poetry - Get Your Flow On!' started by NADIA*BINTA, Jul 9, 2003.

  1. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    feeling a knot grow in my throat

    i begin to get choked up

    my heart begins to ache so very much

    not appeasable by a soft word or gentle touch

    it hurts too much…

    i laugh, to hold back tears

    i smile, to camouflage fears

    i’m trying to keep my composure

    trying hard,

    trying

    ****,

    i’m crying…
     
  2. Bluewater

    Bluewater Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Hey NADIA*BINTA...i feel the emotion in your expression...and the strenght that is in you...very deep flow...much love
    Peace
     
  3. the_story

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    **** this is deep......
    i feel u on this one
    nice flow
     
  4. PlayWitItPimp05

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    awwwwwwww.................
    NB!!!!
    :::::::sings::::::::::
    "You don't have to cry........
    Alone............
    Cuz i'll be right by your side
    To help you be strong........."

    :heart: :heart: PLAY :heart: :heart:
     
  5. justbnme03

    justbnme03 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    let it out so u can b done wit it, very nice flo well felt
     
  6. NADIA*BINTA

    NADIA*BINTA Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    yo thankx for the replies... wasn't crying when i posted... just remembered that feeling... ya know???... that feeling when you're trying not to... but know you're about to cry for whatever reason...

    anyhow... glad ya felt that Bluewater, the_story, justbnme03 &
    PlayWitItPimp05 (thankx for serenading me... that's my JAM!!! expecially on Erykah Badu's Live CD :) )

    peace
     
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