Black Poetry : ...heartache.temptation.trial.loneliness...

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  1. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    jus some random thoughts...when i was goin through a tough time...


    I don't know where you're taking me God. But you've promised me that you will walk with me through every heartache, tempatation, trial, and loneliness. So I'll willingly go. I may get confused, I may cry, I may scream, I may even ask you "why?". But you promised you wouldn't give me more than I can bear. So each heartache makes me stronger, each day may even seem a little longer, and the road gets kind of lonely. But I'll endure it knowing that in the end I'll be rewarded. And one day I'll realize why you led me down this road. So guide me God, direct my paths. I know this confusion will soon be in my past.
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    :kiss1: I hope everything turned out to be ok:kiss1:
    I like this thought
    It was straight from the heart!:kiss1:
     
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    lovely golden one........

    through this heartache lies pain
    through temptation lies the rain
    through trial lies the vain
    through loneliness lies somewhere on the next train
    through the holy spirit rain will disappear
    through the grace of god rainbow of hope will appear
    through the understanding of jesus his love is sincere
    through prayer god will erase all your fears
    and through your guardian angel he will dry your tears
    and you'll be surrounding with your fam us who hold you dear
    never fear
    i'm near
    to hopefully get you through
    Heartache/temptation/trial/loneliness
     
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    sonnee01 Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    WOW.... very heart felt sis...yes, God will continue to direct your steps...so please know that whatever comes will pass!!
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    feel this truely wish i could comfort and caress
    wishing for the best ...................feel u
     
  6. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks for the comments everybody...but im doin good now...i got through it and im happy...the happiest ive been in awhile...
     
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    Wonderful...........

    I always admired your work, and u're a very talented poet. Just wanted to give u a great big hug:heart: and show ya some love.:) I'll be lookin out for ya.



    AM
     
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    your poetry is my inspiration to keep on........I give you soo many props for this one. I know that this is an old peom but in my opinion, you put this here at the right time(for me at least)

    :hearts2:
     
  9. LovelyGoldenOne

    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    thanks everybody:)
     
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    God is always there
    This was so touching sis
    I loved this for real
    Bless you Sis
     
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