Black Poetry : Heart that holds the Key

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  1. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    My heart been a revolving door
    where my love been at it's core
    mask by many unknown bodies
    swaying my love's humble grace
    leaving me this empty space
    until today when i eye'd ur face
    u steped up taking this place
    in a vow to love unconditionally
    understanding reality
    always there ready to go dat mile
    holding the sweetest warm smile
    given a feeling never known
    have me singing this love song
    now i offer this key
    to my heart is where da door be
    unlock it and come in ur see
    where we start heart 2 heart as we
    u hold the key
    my chocolate honey Queen bee
    so this valentine change'd everyday
    i display my love to u
    how much i truely do , loveth u
    words can't express what i feel
    a kiss won't be able to seal
    what i have for u extremely
    ur the key to my heart if u use it
    don't lose it and come inside my
    existance of nudity where we can
    share our emotions and spiritrually
    mentals as we clash together in love
    my heart calls , whispering deep
    surely ur feel me inside ya sleep
    da vision of dream will bring u joy
    the magical key is yours !

    what u gonna do with it now i wanna know !?

    :luv: :luv: :luv: :luv: :luv: :luv: :luv: :luv: :luv: :luv:
     
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    Aaliyahmonet Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Very nicely written. Flow on my brotha.

    AM
     
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    LovelyGoldenOne Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    and here's another one...u know i was feelin this...
     
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    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    Thank u Aaliyahmonet for the beautiful warmth u give


    Thank u LovelyG for the warmth sis , happy it was felt
    within out from da heart i speak......

    Ladies now that the key is on the mat who going to pick it up !.....
     
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    i enjoyed this wonderful flo, flow on Rich!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!:kiss1:
     
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    cursed heart Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Wow you really know your passion:kiss1: Very lovely Rich:kiss1:
     
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    Passionate for real
    The was deeply smooth
    I know the ladies will love
     
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    I agree with Tantrum, this was passionate. Surely she feels you too, and if she indeed has the key she'll enter, if allowed. But what's with the key on the mat? You trying to cause a melee, you better make some copies of that key, lol.
     
  9. $$RICH$$

    $$RICH$$ Lyon King Admin. STAFF

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    thankz nevar for the love and visit always support

    thankz tantrum man love fill da air bruh big ups to the lovin support u give

    thankz crused heart for the warmth and support u give always

    thankz watz for the lovin warm support u show daily
    and yep the key on da mat who will pick it up i guess
    only that true love will ........maybe everybody after it
    who knows only time will tell the story..........lol
     
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    watzinaname Well-Known Member MEMBER

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    Uh, okay.... But, could you put up some curtains in that glass house, I'd like some privacy please...
     
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